.. Main Down The Stream..
the claustrophics collab that wasn't

Hook x2

Nameless Takin Out The Famous, We Abusin the Board..
Underground Plottin To Blow Up The MTV Music Awards..
Embarrassment To Hip Hop, So We Leave Em' Coughed Up..
Mainstream Rappers Bout To Get...Washed Up!..

Verse 1

No More Bullshit, Pop Hip Hop..Not Another Antic..
When Faggots Chingy n' Nelly Gotta Compete For Southern Accents..
Snoop In The Day, Would Shoot Just 2 Spray..Cant Stand Herbs..
Now The C-R-I-P Get Clowned On MTV By Adam Sandler ..
Jada Empty Without Styles .. Need To Make Up For Sum Down Time..
Jay Z, Ja And DMX Retirin?... Bout Time..
Ja Fell Off? He Was Never On..
Bring Jay Back? He Better Off Gone..
Shaq Had A Wack Rap Career, But Owns Cribs..
Eve Attempted To Be A Sex Symbol---
--But The Paw Prints Will Be The Only Hands On Her Tits..
LL Cool J Tried To Return, But Turned w/o Notice..
Only Hit He Had, Was By Jennifer Lopez ..
Puffy, Judd, Affleck . Got Em Wit Body To Match Her Ass..
Lets Face Facts.. Diddy Shoulda Shot Her When he Had The Chance..
Master P's Career Wasn't Long, Just Slow In Time..
Made Shit More Worse Than Bow Wow's Clothing Line..

Hook x2

Nameless Takin Out The Famous, We Abusin the Board..
Underground Plottin To Blow Up The MTV Music Awards..
Embarrassment To Hip Hop, So We Leave Em' Coughed Up..
Mainstream Rappers Bout To Get...Washed Up!..

Verse 2

50 Cent Is Nothin But Petty Cash, His Reign Bout To Stop..
"Cuz Hes A Mutha Fuckin Gangsta Turned Pop.. (Gs RUINED!)"
Leave 21 Bruises On His Head..
Fuck Shots, Sumone Stab Him Instead..
I'll Laugh When Hes Dead, Like I Laugh At Hilary Duff's Music Prophit..
Run By The Jail " Winona , I Stole You A Shirt w/ Pockets!!"
Cash Money Reppin Escalades Before They Could Afford One..
They'd Make More Money If Some1 Wrote THeir Shit For THem..
Cam'ron Reppin The Roc? What An Embarrassment..
I'd Say He's Good..To Show You What Sarcasm Is..
N' Pac Aint Comin Back, So Lets Leave The Deadman Out..
Raps' More Dis-organized Than Redmans House..
If I Hear Anuther "herre or thurr" Some1's Getting Shot..
N' Im Not Talkin Bout Bubba Sparxx's Debut To Hip Hop..
Clips Drop, For Those Who Seek Confession..
Kelly Rowlands' Singing Is Like The Destiny Childs' Yeast Infection..
N' You Wann Talk Bout Bad Careers..Leave Stagga Lee Choked In Acid..
Got More Flaws Than Tony Montana ..In An Open Casket..
No Hope In Classics, Just Platform To Tear Them On..
Laxitives For Diddy , In The New York City Marathon..

Hook x2

Nameless Takin Out The Famous, We Abusin the Board..
Underground Plottin To Blow Up The MTV Music Awards..
Embarrassment To Hip Hop, So We Leave Em' Coughed Up..
Mainstream Rappers Bout To Get...Washed Up!..

Verse 3

Busta BadRhymes Sux..The Industry Hides The Fact..
Ya know Its Wack..When Ya Hear Allen Iverson Try To Rap..
Benzino Lost His Feud.. We Already Assumed His Steeze..
N' Ya Best Believe.. Fat Joe n' Bone Crusher Were Destined---
------------------------------------------------For Sumo Leagues..
Grip Ginuwines Career N' Shatter To Piece
Break Up "Da Band" In A Matter Of Weeks..
Sum1 Get Loon A Bitch..aNuther "I Need A Gurl"---
----------Is Something i Do Not Want To Witness..
Take A G To Christina .. Herd Shes Open For Business..
DMC Originated It, They Got Passed Tho..
Ludacris Speaks So Much Garbage--
--You'd Think Bow Wow Was Stuck In His Afro..
Romeo Was A One Time Show, Like He Back For The Year..
Rap For This Queer? He's As Bad As His Acting Career..
Fuck Yous To Stars Who Hate But Never Met Us..
N' To The Ppl Who Film Young Stars Like an R.Kelly Fetish..
Take Killer Mikes' Gut, N' Grab His Waist In..
It'll Never Happen..Like An Eminem n' Canibus Collaboration..
When Missy Said She Aint Fat, Thats When i Laugh At Her..
Line Up Mainstream Rappers Like The Boston Massacre..

Hook x2

Nameless Takin Out The Famous, We Abusin the Board..
Underground Plottin To Blow Up The MTV Music Awards..
Embarrassment To Hip Hop, So We Leave Em' Coughed Up..
Mainstream Rappers Bout To Get...Washed Up!..

dope as fuck
funny fucking shit
a view thats omn alot of ppls mind no doubt
class drop
pure comedy

Classic Shit...Why Wasnt I Involved, I Got Shit To Get Off My Chest

No More Bullshit, Pop Hip Hop..Not Another Antic..
When Faggots Chingy n' Nelly Gotta Compete For Southern Accents..

LL Cool J Tried To Return, But Turned w/o Notice..
Only Hit He Had, Was By Jennifer Lopez ..

Cash Money Reppin Escalades Before They Could Afford One..
They'd Make More Money If Some1 Wrote THeir Shit For THem..
Cam'ron Reppin The Roc? What An Embarrassment..
I'd Say He's Good..To Show You What Sarcasm Is..

DMC Originated It, They Got Passed Tho..
Ludacris Speaks So Much Garbage--
--You'd Think Bow Wow Was Stuck In His Afro..

^^Comic Gold

Nice, Kinda Dissapointed I Wasnt Involved (I have 40+ lines of shit like that written) but it was humorous to the fullest extent of the law

Damn....what can I say....very creative...funny as hell to read....loved every fuckin line on this one!

Why critque something when everything looked so good! Good shit......

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I Think That You Tried Too Hard To Make It All Come Together In
This One. Good Concept, But The Bolding Of Names And Stuff
Jus Threw off The Verse. Work On It Dude.

Ya.. I Did It At School.. I Can Make This Better
I Bolded It To Make Sure Everyone New Which
Celeb I Was Dissin... Thanks For The Crit..

Any More ?

at skooll??? how old are you bwoy??? very good and entertainin' verse... got a few giggles from me, suppose it could'da been structured better, but apart from that verse fulfilled what I'm sure was your aim. (to make us laugh)

Pretty good diss on just about everyone...

Not crazy about the hook (us old motherfuckers called it a chorus!), but I guess it was pretty good.

Just a personal preference thing I guess.

The rest was real nice, funny, and pretty damn truthful.

Hit em where it hurts, my man.

Peace

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This was very very funny. .The whole lot. .I think the flow suffered comapred to your other masterpieces. .But I didn't really care cuz it wouldn't have flown to me anywayz cuz I laughed to much. .

L-O-L. .This was a great read man. .Props = )

lol Thanks

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