yo fuck is a blackhawk? i never heard of where ever blackhawk in cali is or not so it's perfectly legit line fuck all ya'll bitches who think it's dumb. and yes chicago blackhawks are an NHL ice hockey team so fuck u the wang for not knowin. Oh i see he changed it before ya even culd see it wack bitch ya are paknheat---------------

anyway uppin this let's get sum more votes

yo Pak had this, better and more original punches, structure was weak, but overall better verse. liked this one:

"players on "EFEDREN"/
we all know your secret, those pills are to encrease your "ESTROGEN"/"

vote = pak

HIT THIS UP:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88886

Punches: Both
Flow: Cut (by far)
Wordplay: Both
Vocab: Tied at very little.

Good battle and the punches were about the same from both for effectiveness. It was close, but the shit has to flow, and I think Cut's shit flowed way better. Everything else was evenly matched up. Good drop from both, and Pak, you had some good shit. That Jay Z/Novicane line was tight. Cut, that bar risin line was tight. Really close, and it was hard to vote, but it goes to cut.
No beef, no hate...

Vocab~Pak
Metas~Pak
Punches~Pak
Creativity~no1
Personals~no1
Overall~Pak he took this no doubt mad lines were nice and hot hollaz peeps~1

idk, i beg to differ, both verses were iight to me

and i wasnt really feelin pak's verse, not to mention his shit's all stretched out

flow = cut
structure = cut
punches = cut(barely)
wordplay = cut

vote = cut
i saw this differently

but honestly,i give this battle a 6/10.......wasnt all that

Man...

This battle, I don't know, man...

It's gotta be looked at in two parts...

IM rotate-N this kids head leaven him rest assure lashin back-out at -me//
Im methodical i got more-patience then doctors,spittin rhymes cauzin Mad-Cutastraphree//
IM takin this kid to school wit bless scripts before the test-starts//
YA rhymes needa Aim hi u lost to game tite,My lines more siccer then ya moms strech-marks//
U shud spit streched-bars cuz Im leavin u in red ink like the artist from dare devel//
This kid is the only hit MC at his school wut a rebel.But i got a feelin he aint on my level//
Wuts the world come to white kids tryna act ghetto spittin rap//
chances of u beatin me is like micheal jackson actin black//
you "SPIT" so much shit that ya lips "SWELL UP"/
you look like jayz sippen "NOVACAINE" outta cup/

And then this...

the rhymes put you into critical condition/
so delousional ill have ya tounge ina state of repitition/
players on "EFEDREN"/
we all know your secret, those pills are to encrease your "ESTROGEN"/
your rhymes come "UP" like a "SHORT" stem, i stand "TALL" like "OAK TREES"/
damn ma rhymes make you so delerious you forget ya ABC's/
ma words are "HEAVY" the "WEIGHT" of "BOLDERS"/
ma lyrics be like "SHAMPOO", rain down on you like "HEAD AND SHOULDERS"/
yo ima "BENCH PRESS" ya cofin just to "LIFT YA SPIRTS"/
you so wack "DEAF KIDS" aint even "WANNA HEAR IT"/

Cuz the rules laid out BY PAK HIMSELF...

Say 10 FUCKIN LINES!

So why on earth would you spit 20?

Cut took the first part of his verse easily.

Pak's "Jay-Z" line and the "M. Jackson" line are pretty played.
The lines are stretched with the punches don't come hard at all.

However, the second part of the verse tore Cut the fuck up...

The "estrogen" line and the "deaf kids" line just killed you.
Those hit real hard, the rest was pretty good too.

So...

What to do?

What's fair.

Following the rules is fair.

I'm going with the first ten lines vs. the first ten lines.

It's not my fault Pak didn't heat up until the battle was supposed to be done.

Winner: Cutastraphe (but never drop a whack closer like that again, man)

Peace

Peace

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Flow-Cutty
Vocab-PakN
Metas-PakN better ones
Personals-no
Ryhmescheme-Cutty
Punchlines-PakN

Well it was susposed to be only 10 lines like Cutty I thaught. A bar is a pair of lines, right? Well Pak N had more and tighter everything. Cutty didn't do too bad though.