promotion

[intro]I've got as many verbal powers as Ali had them physical.......
Don't just call me ill, I'm the definition of lyrical.......
my rhymes are spiritual, my words can make you beg down on your knees and crawl.......
my name says it all, my lyrics have no end like the circle round a ball.......
I play with the beats and raps like a girl does with a doll.......
I keep on rappin like it ain't shit, my tracks are so heavy they can make you fall.......
my shit is dope, your lyrics are cheaper than a collect call......

[verse 1]
yeah that's what I call self glorification, like the propaganda of a nation//
those lyrics can make people think you've got the illest creations//
if you don't promote you gotta have a lot of motherfuckin patiens//
if you don't promote yourself motherfuckers don't even notice you//
so if u wanna sell records then what u gotta do is promote urself that's the clue//

[chorus] 2x
promotion is what u need if you don't want shit in slowmotion//
so promote urself like they do in commercials with all those lotions//
yeah make urself fall up like a big black male in Russia//
so keep ur head up and ur feet on the ground for they crush ya//
(make yourself BIG)

[verse 2]
record a rocking demo or album and a webside to expose it//
make the big bosses think YOU are the shit (you're the shit, nigga)//
before you'll get raped like a motherfucking clit (aw FUCK!)//
let everybody know u're here and you wanna make it (I'm here!)//
cuz if u don't do anything, THEY don't do anything and u can shake it//
you might get a label's frontdoor smacked in your fucking face//
but if u try real hard you might make it one of these days (yeah!)//
PROMOTE YOURSELF

[hook]
make yourself big....//
sum peeps get big after ridin dick....//
but u just need promotion kid....(2x)//
(promote yourself)
2x

[chorus]2x

[hook] 1x

[chorus] 1x

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so what do y'all think?

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I think the scheme was solid. . Well done on that. . You stayed on topic nicely. . But I think the topic was very easy & looked very newbish. . If you want to elevate then choose a different topic. . Yes it will be ALOT harder to not just boast but it will look more impresive. .Pz. . Good drop

I AGREE BUT STILL WAS VERY HOT IT SEAMED THOGH LIKE YOU LACKED SOMETHING I CANT FIGURE WHAT THOUGH

thanx 4 the feedback... both of ya!

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the verses was straigt but i wasnt really feelin da hook/chorus

shud work on that

otherwise from that it was a straight drop man

keep em comin

yeah i thought on the whole it was a decent enough read, i just felt the structure was a bit off point, so knocked the flow slightly, and i agree that the topic was weak.......peace, can you hit this up plz......

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=87520

it was good... to an extent...
this is a hard topic to go to... but one that I havent seen done.
props on that...
but your styles a bit newbish...
try rewording what you say...(flip it around, experiment with
different ways to write your lines)
overall I thought this was a decent spit...
Ima checkk your other link... and if I like it,... your in...(the Omens)
~Ashy~

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