RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 11-04-03, 12:13 AM   #1
B~ill
Registered User
 
B~ill's Avatar
 
Posts: 15
Joined: Nov 2003
From: NY
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
lyrically bound

IP: 89ED E59A

fgee-Two Rights Make a Wrong

Ill-Mental-I Wear A Cross

Kevx301 -Sh*t Happpens

i stand my ground lyrically bound,
To a mic on my right arm aimin 2 impound,
Then next brotha that wishes ta speed bye,
Wavin' fake gang signs like he simply wavin' hi,
It makes me sick that all these wannabes wanna try,
To testify, I DENY!
Access to my tireless trainin',
As I work on the stage, style drainin',
All the methodical fools frontin' tools,
Screamin' they lay the law make the rules,
Yet they need mad PRACTICE!
TRACK THIS!
I'am the one who drops knowledge in a rage like an angry sage,
Writin' confusin' chapters forcin' fakaz to turn the page,
You lock me in the cage, I JUST BUST YA GAUGE!
I've been work since the age of a juvenile,
Kickin' continuous hotbeats and phat style,
YET YOUR IN THIEF DENIAL!
Walkin' tall yet stolen profile,
And now your in Hell's court, time for the trial,
Your turn to be tested and bested,
Like I was before I rested,
And took on the brothaz on the current rap scence,
Kickin' madd whackness yet clockin' madd green,
I'VE COME TO REIGN SUPREME!!!
Bring forth my lyrical dream team,
DIVINE, MURDA, AND SCHEME!!
So don't forget to avoid the blink,
Stand wide-eyed and think,
Cause my gat reacts faster than your bat,
When its all over,
People will stand above and ask, who was that?
The insane mic rocka,
The fake b~tch stalka

whatca think?

Last edited by B~ill : 11-04-03 at 01:01 AM.
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-04-03, 01:04 PM   #2
misUnderStood
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: C45E 878B

personally
i think you suck and you need a new punchline
but please continue wit yo heated and fucked rhymes
and unless you think you can buck em and duck nines
dont ever in yo life think that you can come touch mine
walkin round thinkin you can talk up some slick shit
walkin round thinkin you can talk like you slick rick
walkin round thinkin you can come up on a crip shit
you need to quit walkin round thinkin b4 you end up in the crypt bitch
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-04-03, 02:03 PM   #3
B~ill
Registered User
 
B~ill's Avatar
 
Posts: 15
Joined: Nov 2003
From: NY
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: E29B 2B64

so i'm bad and need practice, i mean i'm just startin with this shit you know? i'm tryin to get better, but i need some help for real
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-06-03, 03:27 PM   #4
misUnderStood
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 5C9B BF34

yo dawg chill
b-ill
i thought you wuz aight
so c'mon keep it real
the harder we try the better we get
but we rush to make a mill
i'll admit fuck man im new at this shit to
dont take this shit personal
i aint never tried to diss you
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-09-03, 12:02 AM   #5
Ken Dawg
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
Joined:
Status:
Text Record: 0-1
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 32D9 0BD3

Yeah chill..you got something to start on at least..just elevate a little..which will come over time..aight peace
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-09-03, 12:12 AM   #6
.D. CYPHA
New to RB
 
Posts: 62
Joined: Oct 2003
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: CEF5 716F

i liked the stolen profile part..i laughed out loud when i read that. just keep puttin in your time and pay your dues and the experience will come to you...you already have a decent start.
__________________
let's get this shit straight, i'm here to eliminate- them squadz wit feminine traits, there's no escape!
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:48 PM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.