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Old 11-09-03, 07:17 PM   #1
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Come Home Wit Me

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Come home wit me, where I be sittin lone-a-ly,
Cuz my girl not there wit me consolin me,
Hold it please, don’t come up and boast wit me,
Or I’m gon be forced to knock u down wit da toaster b//
Now it is a fact, I’ma nigga dat came thru da cracks,
But I’m still in da hood strivin hard wut u thinkin bout dat,
So let it be known, Only rEE-Zone I be screaMone when I rap,
is cuz all da frustraShone dats like a boulda on my back//
so hold don’t try to act, like u know wut he goin thru,
cuz u wouldn’t even get it if I made ressurection movie showin u,
no one knew, or eva gonna know,
how I live my life or wut goes on in my skull,//
at night I drive up and down da road,
not goin anywhere jus ridin to cleans my soul
I’m tryin to get him known, Red Wun gon be a name in erybody home,
But I aint a self proclaimed king I aint on anybody throne,//
I aint now king but I’m a P-I-M-P,
but I only keep one girl standin by me,
And it aint no sunshine til she round see,
cuz I’m nothin til she’s bragin bout me//
My life aint perfection, nah I aint Curt Hennig,
I got a painful life man it’s hurt in it,
See these tears in my eye I’m alwayz squirtin it,
and dis gat in my hand I’m alwayz burstin it,//
But I don’t be cryin out loud,
I be cryin thru my rhymes u can sight it right now,
Dats why I drink and rhyme so it’ll be deepa den my spouse,
And deepa den thirty niggaz sleepin in my house,//
But it aint a doubt, dat I ova come it all,
especially when I’m cornered and my backs against da wall,
I aint lettin no nigga hold me down I’m alwayz standin tall,
Even if a 230 pound nigga is grabbin on my arm,//
I’m gon keep on goin even if I gotta crawl,
I aint givin up niggaz it jus goes to show ya all,
U can call all ur mans call all ur soldiers,
and I’ll be da last stadin when dis is all ova,//



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Old 11-09-03, 08:27 PM   #2
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yo yo yo come home wit me its jus a 1 night stand/i kno im 13 but im doin watever i can/cuz its only 1 life 2 live/so can i have 1 night 2 spend/dont matta wat time u wanna leave/but when u leave make sure its wit me/we can kick a lil convo/leave da spot go right 2 da condo/if u wanna talk we aient gotta 2 hit da bed/we can chill or watch a movie instead/cuz i aient goin rush u 4 suttin u dont wanna do/so we aient gotta do it if u dont want 2/i jus want u 2 come home wit me/have a talk and roam wit me/and if u give me da call/we can do it all/till its time 4 school 2 morra
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Old 11-09-03, 08:35 PM   #3
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Old 11-09-03, 08:40 PM   #4
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it was really ill, the flow could have been a little better though
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Old 11-09-03, 09:21 PM   #5
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U didnt hear my flow so u dont know how I flow. Self wut r u talkin bout?
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Old 11-09-03, 09:56 PM   #6
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i'm feel what your doin
keep it real
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Old 11-09-03, 10:04 PM   #7
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thanx fa da love man. Keep em comin RB
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