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Yo spell it out ---

ya mouth could never taste the (Cyphs-I-laid)
look at the list u gunna be another (life-i-take)
after i infected a style-ish-blade blood with a violent-rage
why am I always (fight-n-fakes)-----this (KID) is
another (H)onest yet (I)nnocent (V)ictom thats gunna Die-from-aids

Why even write back/
u like a tight ass of a kid playin around with Mike Jacks
i'll fuckin verbally molest so u could at least have a slight CRACK(ass and jokeh aha

you should thank ya moms for havin you!! cuz these last lines r important-
cuz i'd ripp you out faster than a fuckin coat hanger abortion
pull you out in portions
and eat u alive --at night-and look for more skin ///in tha morn-in????
fuck this Kid this cat will get his ass tore-in
by foriegn objects thats bein forced-in


you just got merked

1liner....

I Open Face 1...'Sonned...wits Gun's- Dead Lead-...Weigh'd em in Like Pun-
He's 1liner^...If I was him I'd Spit like dis an Run...-Cus I'd Be Done-
But I Aint...Like Paint~1Liner only coats as sub Primer-He's a Basic Dutch'Boy-
Punch-n-Bean dis'Boy like Soy..-Thinkin Dad's Logitech was his New Toy-
Ripp'ed en Half Like 9 yellow Pages'~Leave em Wit nuttin to Look Up^-
Wrecked...The last Boy off the Alter?~Only way ya spit Sin'Full an fill a-cup-
Ruptered His Vertebree~twisted Splean Connect'till tail-n-tip interviene-
20 years old? yesterday 18-...This pre-teens hard as-Caffeine free-
Merk'd....Like ya Avi'Werks Ya nuttin But Disapearin Act>Won't Up this Once-
Same wit only Fonts-Cyphilaids~Illa than the winner of Tour De France'...

HeH~>TiMe FeR VoTeS.......
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Punches - Cyph
Flow - Cyph
Multies - Cyph
Mets - Cyph
Creativity - One

Vote - Cyph.......


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FUCKIN STUPID why even post here
D?R

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Open- tie
Metas - cyph
Creavitity - cyph
Personals - cyph
Flow - tie (both akward at times)
Finish - cyph (close, but liner ur didn't require as much creativity as being iller than lance armstrong with cancer..)
Abuse - liner

vote = cyph....get ur record fixed n go to elite already.

liner that was by far the best i've sen from u so far. shit would have beat most, but sum of ur lines were only set-up while all of cyphs had punches. he had more creative word play. the HIV thing with the letters isn't excatly wordplay cus ur not actually playin off the meanin of words, just the spelling.

RETURN HONEST VOTES:

METAPHORES - Cyphilaids
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - Cyphilaids
STRUCTURE - Cyphilaids
CREATIVITY - Cyphilaids
PERSONALS - Cyphilaids
OPENING - Cyphilaids
CLOSING - Cyphilaids
MULTIES - Cyphilaids
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - Cyphilaids

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392

Opener: Cyph
Closer: Cyph
Personals: Cyph
Punches: Cyph
Flow: none
Win: Cyphilaids
Return the honest vote please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93603

HeH~>TiMe FeR VoTeS.......
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vote= cyphilaids
better punches,
1 i felt that sum of shit dint make sense!
1 u up for a rematch on audio once i set my sound click up! liking that freestyle to pac instrumental!
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