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you know the drill.


check in.

aight checkin in whats the due time holla back .................................................. .............................................

umm...shall we say 40 minutes from your next post?


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done 40 min from NOW............................................... .................................................. ................................

"YOURE~WACK~DAWG, YOU HOG ALL THE WACK YOU WACK HOG, SHIT GETS FOGGY IN THE "FOG"//


^see how stupid that shit looks?


kid thinks hes got dope wordplay... well, i'm not sold
watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold
L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest
9-15 isnt just a record, its also his average bench press!
'gainst Dez hes always less...... like a pint to a gallon
what good'll your e-guns do? i wear an i-vest when im battlin
kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar
new-b posts never even have half a dope punch..


theyre all wack..especially the 1liners


**keyed after reading one of his battles****

You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands
but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand


i'm Grab"n a preist to Bless me Right--- so i can grab all ya D/r's and turn there necks RIGHT
so all you got LEFT is the THEFT that would immediatly ~Supress ya Hype''
like a glock with out tha light--u could obses me for life
u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right
You aint evil or see though SO U COULD NEVER Posses these EYES
AND THATS WHY as u predictid ur only gunna be a Texcee for LIFE

You could neva Break this or~Stop-This-Hammer-
from leaveN you face-less --shot in ya grammar --and show u the tru meanin of Race-ist Prop-a-gan-da

punches- dez
flow- defiantly dez
wordplay- 1liner i guess
structure- dez
vocab- both
opener- dez
closer- dez's closer was funny when ya think about it it's hilarious
made me laugh more- of course dez

final vote- dez

theres my vote and dez wins easliy

i guess this dude Didnt look at were he's from to get my punches
anyways uppin again
Shit i din't even use wordplay
But i get the cat LMAO

I don't even know if i'm allowed 2 vote so if i'm not then just erase it

punches-Dez
watch me crack his fungus..to prove i break the mold
L's like a post 9/11 dealership.....offering 0% interest
^^those were the 2 best punches in the battle, both from Dez

wordplay-1liner
You could Have a million actors trapped in ya ass~ and stuffed in ya glands
but thats the only way your Raps~ could ever be backed by a popular demand
^^the best wordplay of the battle

i don't vote on structure

Flow-1liner would've won if it wasn't for this-----------u could copy and spit every word i speack ~twice~and evey breath i breathe~~ and still not do it right
^^^5 times longer then the rest of your bars

personals-nobody
vocab-i didn't really see any from anybody
Opener-Dez
Closer-1liner, because Dez's doesn't rhyme-------kid your joke, he who says otherwise is nothing but a liar
new-b posts never even have half a dope punch..

final vote=3 Dez 2 1liner
Vote-Dez

aight 1liner ya produce sum good shit but ya flow and structure kill ya...follow dez's example bra..
breakdown=
punches-dez
structure-dez
flow-dez
creativity-1
enjoyment-both
metas-both
sustainment-dez..threw more
vote-dez

due to flow n better punches

good battle ya'll pz

opposite of down.



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illadelph is like the sun cause we shine with rhymes, underground is like the moon you only see us at times..

flow: dez, easily...
wordplay: 1liner, barely...
personals: dez had that openin personal i guess...
opener: c ^^...
multis: 1liner...
metas: tie...
closer: niether was good...

winner: dez takes this...nice battle though...

hit this up if u can...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94171

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punches - dez
personas - dez
wordplay -dez
vocab - tie
opener - dez
closer - dez
overal - dez


1liner what the fuck is up with ure structure man that shit was fucking off really badly...if u gonna battle in elevated atleast try to come nice with structure it's the least u can do homie

no hate dez was too much for you dog
and quantity dont matter only quality

peace hit up my sig with honest vote
peace