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Old 11-28-03, 09:12 PM   #1
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[ - Bash Is Back - ]

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[ Chorus ]
My Enternal Emotion is Filled With amazing grace
I Left R.B For a Minute So Look At What Been taking place
Patiently waiting till my Ghost Detaches
Watch Your Soul Surpasses
Till Your Brain starts to Leak Out Matter
Slain wit Popes in Gathers
Your Skull Gets ShaTTer , Because Bash Is Back!!
( 2 Times )

[ Verse One ]
Metamorphosis balanced on the closed wings of a Golden Eagle…
While weight shifts dishevel flows in the course of pure upheaval…
Emcee’s are feeble in dismemberment of pure microphone mastery…
Everlastingly free, question my Legend of existence? That shit is blasphemy
Shifting wavelengths in 8 strengths, decibels become measures of speed… Dispatch bullets while holding the hammers, suspending your inevitable pain
I clasp hands while soundbarriers are broken around my frame
Forming equations from the stem of my brain, causing these waves sent from the depths of my pain
pouring the rain wept since ya all never remain…
Evolution consequencial to life of sinfull expression of character…
Punishment of dissent to devils overcome by temptations that damage-ya
Malevolence is a key element manifested in personas of anarchist minds…
Growth of following makes forthcoming domination and allying wise
Precarious preparations amount to nothing they get visciously torn…
Hilariously growths of potency extend, your very constituency seams forlorn
Verbally bashing through cranial expanses your pitiful reactions are hopeless…
Unstable factions disrupt and blow from the inside like clasped explosives
Off The Edge In Visions Of Being Dead..
Once Lead Loyal Men, Yet Disobeyed Me And The Allegiance Of Each Pledge

[ Chorus ]
My Enternal Emotion is Filled With amazing grace
I Left R.B For a Minute So Look At What Been taking place
Patiently waiting till my Ghost Detaches
Watch Your Soul Surpasses
Till Your Brain starts to Leak Out Matter
Slain wit Popes in Gathers
Your Skull Gets ShaTTer , Because Bash Is Back!!
( 2 Times )

[ Verse Two ]
Collaborations seam meaningless, relapsed as I trash the whole populas…
Simultaneously inflict fractures, attack from all angles, so Ya all Can't stop us…
Memory lapses as haemorrhages float to the surface and defenses collapse…
I watch nations fall, as aneurisms burst I’ve slain you before your last retract
Walk Into My Shoes..You Wont Barely Grasp..And Just Fairly Clasp..all these kids Breatin Heat On Me..but yet i 'Rarely-Gasp'
Dripped In Basalt....And Really Put The Czech To Your Dome..Wreck His Phones...Piss All Over His Tomb just to Disrespect His Bone's
The Microphones I Rip It..The Stones I Break It...The Flows I Spit It...The Throne I Take It
Imbue Into You Dudes...and i'll Take A Broom To The Tourney..Becuz i'll 'Sweep' 'Through-It-Too
Leave 'em Fighters Slashed...Fast to Raise-The-Stakes..and not Praise-Mistakes....I Got Perfect Words Programmed To putta Rose To These Herbs..and really Bouquet These Fakes
I Got More Rhythmic Than Tendicies For Instance Persistence Kills An Existence These Bars are Resistance Keep Wishing Pencils Exploit Crucial Incisions Blurs Theses Raps-Vision With A Sentence
We Rap Flames Rapid..Attack-Quick like Rabid-Rabbits
Conceited Life Of Dishonesty, But Honestly, Deceiving Is Harming-Me
Real Niggas Up , Faggots Down Because I'm back On R.B!!!!!!!

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Old 11-28-03, 09:18 PM   #2
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Old 11-28-03, 09:20 PM   #3
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HOOK NEED WORK
THE VERSES THEMSELVES WERE SOLID AS HELL I LOVE THAT SHIT AND YOU BEEN MISSED TWIN WHERE IS WEST NOW
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Old 11-28-03, 09:25 PM   #4
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Originally posted by WORD~PERFECT
HOOK NEED WORK
THE VERSES THEMSELVES WERE SOLID AS HELL I LOVE THAT SHIT AND YOU BEEN MISSED TWIN WHERE IS WEST NOW

Thanks...Shit wasnt my best....I havent did an open mic in a while
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Old 11-28-03, 09:51 PM   #5
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yo good vocab on this peice right here. original rhyming words...really enjoyed the chorus it seemed to tie the song together well.
good subject as well
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Old 11-28-03, 11:11 PM   #6
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yo good vocab on this peice right here. original rhyming words...really enjoyed the chorus it seemed to tie the song together well.
good subject as well

Thanks dawg....Upping
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Old 11-28-03, 11:38 PM   #7
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that was killer song, the hook needs some work but your verses were great, nice ta c ye back...keep up the good work...can ye peep me and R-Ts collab its in my sig thing...thanks man pz
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Old 11-28-03, 11:44 PM   #8
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that was killer song, the hook needs some work but your verses were great, nice ta c ye back...keep up the good work...can ye peep me and R-Ts collab its in my sig thing...thanks man pz

Aight I'll peep your collab...
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Old 11-28-03, 11:50 PM   #9
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yo you bk....so...jus hope ya more mature this time!!!
this is another alias so dont mock the start date!!!
not a bad piece..1st verse was messy but hook was not bad then ya came strong in 2nd...overall=7/10 pz
keep goin dawg
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Old 11-29-03, 12:06 AM   #10
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Originally posted by Phil.M.Up
yo you bk....so...jus hope ya more mature this time!!!
this is another alias so dont mock the start date!!!
not a bad piece..1st verse was messy but hook was not bad then ya came strong in 2nd...overall=7/10 pz
keep goin dawg

Thanks dawg but who are you???
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Old 11-29-03, 12:12 AM   #11
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yo your verses were aiight..i like your vocab though...but your hook needs a bit of work... overall great peace...keep at it dawg
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Old 11-29-03, 06:42 AM   #12
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Yea, Your back dawg, good to see it.

Your vocab here was tight, but you went over the top a bit, this would be extremely difficult if you were using this for audio, but for a text piece this shit goes way beyond dope..l0l

You had good structure, however the hook was off flow..it just lacked something, but the rest flowed smoothly like silk, first verse i felt was superior..but they both were dope...

4/5 - dope.... what was the comment towards me all about..lol?
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Old 11-29-03, 10:19 AM   #13
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Yea, Your back dawg, good to see it.

Your vocab here was tight, but you went over the top a bit, this would be extremely difficult if you were using this for audio, but for a text piece this shit goes way beyond dope..l0l

You had good structure, however the hook was off flow..it just lacked something, but the rest flowed smoothly like silk, first verse i felt was superior..but they both were dope...

4/5 - dope.... what was the comment towards me all about..lol?

Thanks Fam....I really appreciated your feedback...And that comment towards you was nuthin dawg...I just looked at ur name and realized that I could have made a line using it..So I did it....One love fam
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Old 11-29-03, 12:36 PM   #14
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Damn Bash,
this is disapointing..why you've to bite me?
i'll get links
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Old 11-29-03, 12:47 PM   #15
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Damn Bash,
this is disapointing..why you've to bite me?
i'll get links

lol...Ok
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