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12-02-03, 02:46 PM | #1 | ||||
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[- So What Happend? Ft. Potent -]
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So what happend?
Edicius I just called u to tell u some thing of wich im proud u answerd, i said its me, boom u hang up. i wish u wouldnt be so judgemental i got some news , what the fuck ?!?! So now im walking thru the rain, my discman loud..dreaming of how its ment to be,.. my mind is wondering, why u hang up..while nickelback is screaming: 'this is how u remind me' Is it strange im confused?? 2 days ago we were kissing and huggin and now u act like this! why u dont act to ur feelings , inviroment actings makes me pissed! So i watched to the sky, and a tear escaped my eye, its gettin dragged into the rain,gettin washed off but inside it remains the pain!. Why did i play my cards wrong? because the fear of failure? I wonder.. But its that that drove me into this position we both are in, is it faith? our destiny? cuz feelings are still there jus like hope the situation isnt in check mate! Life..i wonder..is it ment to be like this?..must be gratefull for what ive got.. Potent Im thankful to my Lyrics Teachers Now.. I set new levels like Spirit Metres I remember those who helped me Thinking of the hands dealt to me Now I want to shake it in person I'm ex-erting b'cos i'm ex-hurting These scars.. make me Who I Am I felt I was speaking To The Hand But I was.. To those of Great God You couldn't keep your Lines Reel.. If you Make Rod Yeah.. I'm Straight Odd But Mines Skill Take a day of both of our lives, ..and be suprised.... Replyed to: Doc Jo jo Double 0 Seven
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12-02-03, 02:54 PM | #2 | ||||||
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way to short edicus made me think hard but pot1ent didnt come as good he left me hanging with such a generalized verse when i know e can do better with better thought this would be flames but on this it felt a little short
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12-02-03, 03:03 PM | #3 | ||||||
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Mike just said drop 10.. so i did.. it does look extremely short..
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12-02-03, 08:12 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Edicius, Your Verse Lacked A Consistent Flow, Which Turned Me Off. Your Words Came Across Well, But The Flow's Inconsistency Brought Your Shit Down Alot.
Potent. . I've Definately Seen ALOT Better From You. That Shit Is Extremely Short, And It Felt Like A Cliff Hanger Verse. Meaning You Left Me Hanging And Expecting Something More. Droppin 10 Lines Like That Isn't Good, Next Time Make Longer Lines If You Know You'll Have Only 10 To Do. You Disappointed Me On This. This Coulda Been A Helluva Lot Better Considering What I've Seen From Both Of You. This Doesn't Change The Fact That You're Both Dope, But It Didn't Help Your Cause. -Formula.
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12-02-03, 08:20 PM | #5 | |||||||
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yeah like Formula said, it lacked a certain consistant flow throughout it. Some parts I could vibe with, some I couldn't.
It would have been better if you just cut down your lines to make them fit to a nice and easy beat. I wasnt feeling Potents that much either, not like it was bad, it just didnt work to well. I felt lines were too short, then too long. But what do I know, formula said your both dope, so i'll go with him. Keep spitting |
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12-02-03, 08:23 PM | #6 | ||||
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Different..
Edicus.. You Dropped Stretched.. Suttin Im Not Used To You Doing Ne MOre.. Not Bad None The Less, Stayed On Topic Pot1ent.. Short, Maybe A Lil Too Short.. NOt Bad Tho.. Overall Decent Piece 7/10 |
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12-03-03, 08:41 AM | #7 | ||||
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Oh well Msn quik keys ..somethimes lack things, ..sometimes its just a drop ..lol^
To be continued.. [Oh the stretch thing, it aint, ..on audio tho..but thnx all = )..]
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12-03-03, 09:11 AM | #8 | ||||||
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Edicius you verse was a bit lengthy on each like, it too a bit long to drop.
Potents was a little to short, maybe if blended them together it might of worked...... still ok tho. |
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