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Old 12-01-03, 11:36 PM   #1
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Corrupted Visions: Never Quitting (Feat: Formula)

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2881#post952881
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...2890#post952890
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...18&pagenumber=1


Masta C:
Im never gonna quit with these spits cause im gonna rip non stop..
While I con cops im gonna be jotting never stopping to spawn slop…
Cause everytime I spit magic happens that cause tragic crashins..
That collide ill flow and I’ll still blow without drastic rappen…
Cause ill be spitting my shit while ripping my hits that make the top..
Nothing will make me stop cause I shake the drops that ache hip hop..
When I reminisce in every diss that makes me exist and spray severe…
Cause I never remiss with a vocal hiss cause it just makes me stay in gear..
Slaying peers while decaying ears with sick spits that just flow so smoothly..
With lyrics that soothe thee and ya cant prove me wrong cause ya cant move me..

Never quitting with these writtens im spitten..
Till im hitting the floor for to much rippen..
Cause im slitting ears while heads are splitten..
Never slipping cause im never quitten.

Formula:
I Can Never Quit, Too Legit, My Blood Runs Like A Winner
Spun From A Beginner To Bein Imitated By Pretenders
But I Don't Let Um Bog Me Down Cause They Are Carbon Copies
I Jog The Pounds Round Town, Hustle To Get Me Starvin Feed
Ain't Shit That Bothers Me, Mother Fuckers Try N Break Me Down
Industry Clowns Spit My Sounds N Expect Money To Be Found Now
They Try N Force Me To Leave, Retire My Mic N Walk Away
Prespire I Might, But Of Course I'll Lead N Live N Talk Another Day
Complication With Your Plan, Understand My Frustration
With Hatin Alienators Who Single Me Out As A Form Of A Statement
Here's The Basic, Basically All The Hatred I See Is Due To Envy
I'll Never Give Up Like Ali, I'm Stingin Like A Bee Lyrically
Mentally, I'm At A Capacity Where Relax N Needs Are No Option
I'll Anthrax Ya Family Often, I CAN'T QUIT. . Fuck It I'm Jus Startin

Never quitting with these writtens im spitten..
Till im hitting the floor for to much rippen..
Cause im slitting ears while heads are splitten..
Never slipping cause im never quitten.

Masta C:
Quitting is just not a option it never even once graced my mind…
You just cant replace my prime when I just ace my rhymes..
The word quit isnt in my vocabulary when it comes to this…
So some get pissed but if I left id be the one that’s missed…
Never gonna cease my skill increase not even if its obesed..
Skills never decrease cause of so much to release, wanna piece?..
Cause Im not gonna hold back not once even if im a old pap..
Cause I never unfold crap just like how this verse beholds facts..
And I never played to try cause I got in and now I stay inside…
Doing this till the day I die cause im never gonna say goodbye..
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Old 12-01-03, 11:41 PM   #2
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This was a good collab, you both hit hard and stayed on topic, the flow was normal and the vocab from both was good very creative could you both hit up my battle it's in my sig..its bein slept on...and check out word p 7 cats...its hot...pz
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Old 12-01-03, 11:55 PM   #3
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we need more shit like this keep droppin
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Old 12-02-03, 05:57 AM   #4
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really feelin Formula's verse...illl as fuck....Masta C reppin Corrupted well

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Old 12-02-03, 02:21 PM   #5
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Hey Thanks For The Feedback So Far, Keep The Feedback Coming In, Its Much Appreciated, Thanks.
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Old 12-02-03, 05:40 PM   #6
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Y0 it has nice flow and everything.... you guys should keep doin shit like this....


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Old 12-02-03, 08:50 PM   #7
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hot as hell, what can I say.

Ya both had hard flows, I liked how Masta C spit lines where you fit a whole bunch of words in the line and wrap it up at the end.

Formulas verse was real nice, had that "You can't take my style" vibe to it. Really enjoyed both parts.

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Old 12-03-03, 02:53 PM   #8
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Old 12-03-03, 03:08 PM   #9
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yo, nice drop, it flowed real nice and had a nice concept as well...
worked real well as a collab...
keep it up...

hit this batle to stop from sleepin n to keep things poppin...

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Old 12-03-03, 07:14 PM   #10
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gotta say masta...another nice drop, wasnt expecting the last verse,....both came good and complimented eachothers styles......coo.....pZ.....stay up...
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Old 12-04-03, 03:17 AM   #11
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Old 12-04-03, 11:30 AM   #12
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When I reminisce in every diss that makes me exist and spray severe…Cause I never remiss with a vocal hiss cause it just makes me stay in gear..


Tight couple of lines that.

This whole thing was tight I liked ya approach to the subject and ya rhyming styles were quick and smooth and i like that.

Both of ya vocabs were cool but it'd be nice to throw in a bit more now and again.

This was a tight collab tho...like to hear it in audio.

Anyway retrun the favour and check my soon to be posted "drifter"
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Old 12-04-03, 11:45 AM   #13
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4 this igv yaaahl ten outta ten this was fucking illllllllllllllll, and u lot are talented aswel by far.

your rhymes were put together like a don an i love yo lyrics master c,

hit me up in pm, i wanna offer u niggaz both sumfin, if you rap how u write i wanna make this shit......you know.....hit me up in pm, both of you! safe...
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Old 12-04-03, 06:54 PM   #14
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Old 12-04-03, 10:18 PM   #15
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Absolutely Genius..Your rhymes are harsh..but you got all the right stuff..keep it up....a lot of people look up to you............................................... .......
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