Just Rip My Rap Book Cuz Thats My Life
Met this Chick that makes it possible to
....Know There Is a Christ!....
I'd Fight For Death if Life Past This Girl
When I look into her Eyes Its A Picture Of
Heavens Demise
Even God would Give up Paradise For A Day
Or Even A Night
Id Take Revenge With Armys if She Ever Felt a Slap'a'Pain
And Avenge Her Through Mind Games Ever She Felt Shame

"Open'd My Eyes One Day To See Life
She Walked with A Command In Her Eyes
And When I look into Them I know
That If I died Wouldnt Matta Cuz I Met A girl
With Angelic Ties"

Am I just another Passing Phase A Passing Day
Will This End In ouR Fortune Or Will I Be Thiefed Of My Jade
Am I Just Trippin, Insecure To This Haze
So as we Dreamin and Schemin of Life on Our own Path
To You Is This a Love song or is this another Pimp Rap.

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95975
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Aesop.

Dunny... yo structure is complicated... its hard to follow... yeah to you to rhymes an sounds good... but u also gotta let the reader understand it too... but yo i caught onto it... the verse or verses was coo... i liked this read actully... i don't like to many reads.. but this was a coo one... keep elevatin dunny... an this girl... seems like a real eye catcher..(like mine) on3

shit was on point a little complex structure but a great read and i would love you to have you in the fam

You can tell the man likes his topic. Ill rhyme typist? I dunno if I'd go that far. Still some really good shit right here.

werd...your structure was hella complex and shit but i got the point. Shit was a pretty hot drop...I liked the the topic and your wordplay was tiight too. Guess you got them love jones a'y kicko lol....I aiighnt mad at cha. Be easy son, 1

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Jimmy L. , Louis L. , Aj R. , Tyler R. , Chris R., Dan W. , Matt F.......
" You all will never be forgotten and your spirits live within us all!!! R.I.P*"


" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26

uppppppppppppppppppppppppin1.

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this was a good drop. i liked your wordplay it was great the way you started this was dope as hell very good i didnt like how the last 2 lines were in the first verse but your descriptions fixed it so it flowed good anyways but this was a great drop and the title was very creative props on that an yo could you drop an opinion on the battle in my sig or my open mic thanks

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

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word to ya muthaz. everyone in this spoke the truth basically. very nice
read as i already mentioned. dun't be jealuz of my first line. its barely
as good as ur worst line. haha. nice rhyme. in due time. till then.
peACE