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check in and we drop our verses within

20 mins no feedin

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hey, yo, I gotta go... alright if we put this on "pause" till 2morrow?
I'll be back on either by 3:45pm(EST ohio) or 9:45pm(EST ohio), okay? i'll see you then.
I DO gotta go//
this ain't a "no-show"!//

aight

just drop tomarrow sometime

if ya want no feedin anyway

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aiight dawg untill he gets back can u vote for this shit...?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96050

once I'm through-with-you, you'll need-a-new//
"band-aid" to work wit, cuz I'll leave-ya-bruised//
I saw ya many losses... now I KNOW I'm a win this//
you ain't "2 far 2 reach," you's "2 scared 2 begin this!// (<this rb)
Mah rhyme skillz are now leavin you like a "packett"//
cuz yer playin "ketchup" to me, dawg, ya couldn't hack it//
'flaming' faggit, did ya words 'catch fire' now?//
MY RHYMES are a wet towel that'll "rap" you up and put you out!//
YOU said it yo'self, that you's ONLY a nitemarre...//
and I guess a failure, too, cuz there's NO ONE you might scare!//

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96219

HIT THIS UP AND I'LL HIT YALL UP WHEN YALL DROP~
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explanations:
"band-aid"= double meaning intended there... as in, for cuts & for a band (ex: rap group)
'packett'... and "...ketchup"= they're in relation to each other.
oh yea, and nitemarres are supposed to scare ya.


That's that... Aight, Nite... time (4 u) to write!

nite- spit ur shit, dawg...
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Johnny Carson aint really funny so get chopped w/ lyrical axes||
Each line of mine takes a 'piece' of yo soul like 'spiritual taxes'||
Gettin 'pre-written faxes' still U cant 'communicate' any damages||
My words ravage, U get ate up like 'textual somolian savages'||
U more pussy than Garfield, Dr. Suess wrote more complexity||
Stick to suckin at stand-up, U need wack rappers Vesictomy||*
Its not perplex, when intellegent text, starts tearin ya neck||
U just a pawn on this lawn of battles and I gotcha in Check||
My bars are sharp as spikes nailin ya chest to brick walls||
BUt is it right for the 'straight males' to see dis 'prick fall'?||

Johnny Carson a comedian
*Vesictomy-cuttin a tube in ya dick, this case just 'cut the flow'

VOTE=NITEMARRE

BETTER PUNCHES AND FLOW~

NICE VERSE FROM JOHNNY THO~

HIT UP MY BATTLE WITH VERSE112

Opener: Nite
CLoser: John
Punches: Nite
Personals: John
Flow: Nite
Win: Nite
Close battle. PLease hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96364

hey wat up ppl

aight this was pretty easy to vote night had better pounches and structure he had flow

both were creative and give a tie in injoyment


my vote NITEMARE

return the favour and time

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=96402

peace

yo ite nite got with most things specially punches and flow......................jonny manm you gota elavate try to use better multies etc................... repay the favor with an honest vote .....................................thx.......... pz

nites punches hit harder............more complex.

good verses from both

but vote-nite
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