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Razor 0 0%
Rhymes 5 100.00%
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Old 12-04-03, 10:53 AM   #1
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Razor vs RHYMES

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10-15 lines

you spit first

explained votes

goodluck

and ima hit this in a hour or so

peace
 
Old 12-04-03, 11:04 AM   #2
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Yo kid have you lost ya mind Razor slice you up and make you hard to find The flow is divine too many levels ascended I know you can't comprehend it But it's plain is day Rhymes was born gay Made his mother so confuse to these nuts his mother prayed Don't get slayed like dragon cut off ya tongue now who's braggin
I'm going to say it now let the truth be heard Rhymes had sex with his hampster and his bird
 
Old 12-04-03, 12:02 PM   #3
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This newb is as dumb as it get ,he "cant read or write"...
I guess a simple fuck you is enough to bet you right?...

Ima spice it up "slice" it so it hurts when razor and Rhymes meet...
Cut you up with every lines add a bit a suger your lines arn't that sweet...

This "Razor" is "Dull" not worth "Spreading butter on toast"...
Use no fire jus words that will leave out to fuckin roast...

You picked the wrong site to dawg no cars out to park...
Drop kick you leave face up have you count stars but all you see is dark...

"read or write" the rules say 10-15 line he did less and write read his verse
"Slice" he is the razor but i cut him a loss
"Razor"=Rhymes he carrys
"dull" his lines are wack and played out
"speading the butter" its like sayin its not worth the battle
my closing has to do with his profil read it

peace
 
Old 12-04-03, 12:05 PM   #4
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RAZOR THAT SHIT WAS WHACK~
ELEVATE~

RHYMES HAD BETTER FLOW AND PUNCHES~
AND ACTUALLY MADE SENSE~

HIT THIS UP FOR ME~
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96353
 
Old 12-04-03, 12:07 PM   #5
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shit yo i forgot a bar but i guess i don't need it

thans slipt for your vote

uuppiinn for more votes

peace
 
Old 12-04-03, 04:18 PM   #6
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uuuuuuuupppppppppiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn

for votes

peace

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Old 12-04-03, 04:19 PM   #7
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96454

RETURN THE FAVOR AND PEEP THIS MAN~

APPRECIATED~
 
Old 12-04-03, 04:23 PM   #8
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like slipt said elevate razor....... fix your struacture, flow and that shit

blow out..........ryhmes in every category

return tha favor playa......hit this hit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96447
 
Old 12-04-03, 04:24 PM   #9
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Hmm. Ima go out ona limb and say Rhymes took this. Lol ryhmes ripped da shit outta razor. Razor man read some battles ta help ya see how it gos down. No hate. Rhymes had better flow, structure, personals, punches.
Can ya hit this up please?
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Old 12-04-03, 04:28 PM   #10
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punches=RHYMES
closer-rhymes
metas-rhymes
multis-...
opner-rhymes
structure/flow-rhymes
overall-rhymes

rhymes ripped u kid u needa elevate n make some sence dawg
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Old 12-04-03, 04:48 PM   #11
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Old 12-04-03, 04:53 PM   #12
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Rhymes.....yer definintion wasn't even needed dog....

easy noobie battle...........

elevate, Razor, mo metas, wordplay, vocab , structure.........

Rhymes
 
Old 12-04-03, 04:55 PM   #13
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Devastating and one sided battle...

Well, maybe not devastating, but Rhymes sure fucked Razor up!

Horrible paragraph format for Razor.
Weak punches.
No wordplay.
No rhyme scheme.

Rhymes didn't floor me with his talent, but he knows how to put together a battle verse alot better than Razor...

Minor wordplay, decent metas...

Punches that connected.

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