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Old 12-04-03, 01:12 PM   #16
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thank you ace to see someone of your rep say that adds alot of confidence and makes me want to try harder in future work
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Old 12-04-03, 01:16 PM   #17
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yo, i was a little harsh b4... u had some nice wordplay in the second half... i found a beat if flows better too.. kind-a a anthem type shit... it's good... i still think u can do better tho bro... when that next collab goin' up... c'mon i did my verse like 20 minutes after u asked me,... lol.. 1
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Old 12-04-03, 04:38 PM   #18
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ME AND YOU AND LIKE 2 OTHERS ARE DONE WE NEED THE LAST 4
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Old 12-04-03, 05:09 PM   #19
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yo this was a hot piece, you had some good vocab and unique structure you've done better but then again this was dope considering you teryed something different, i think you came off easy the first half then second half you really hit some hard lyrics well writ props man an yo could you hit up my battle with an honest vote its bein slept on thanks
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Old 12-04-03, 11:35 PM   #20
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thnks
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Old 12-05-03, 01:38 PM   #21
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up last time
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Old 12-06-03, 04:57 PM   #22
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Hot shit daddy, good to see your still active. It's a damn shame people sleep on your pieces. Stay up homie
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Old 12-06-03, 10:32 PM   #23
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straight, not too bad

fix the structure and ull be staight

the topic kinda swayed but it s cool

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