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12-04-03, 01:12 PM | #16 | ||||||
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thank you ace to see someone of your rep say that adds alot of confidence and makes me want to try harder in future work
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12-04-03, 01:16 PM | #17 | |||||||
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yo, i was a little harsh b4... u had some nice wordplay in the second half... i found a beat if flows better too.. kind-a a anthem type shit... it's good... i still think u can do better tho bro... when that next collab goin' up... c'mon i did my verse like 20 minutes after u asked me,... lol.. 1
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12-04-03, 04:38 PM | #18 | ||||||
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ME AND YOU AND LIKE 2 OTHERS ARE DONE WE NEED THE LAST 4
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12-04-03, 05:09 PM | #19 | |||||||
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yo this was a hot piece, you had some good vocab and unique structure you've done better but then again this was dope considering you teryed something different, i think you came off easy the first half then second half you really hit some hard lyrics well writ props man an yo could you hit up my battle with an honest vote its bein slept on thanks
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12-04-03, 11:35 PM | #20 | ||||||
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thnks
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12-05-03, 01:38 PM | #21 | ||||||
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up last time
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12-06-03, 04:57 PM | #22 | |||||||
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Hot shit daddy, good to see your still active. It's a damn shame people sleep on your pieces. Stay up homie
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12-06-03, 10:32 PM | #23 | ||||||
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straight, not too bad
fix the structure and ull be staight the topic kinda swayed but it s cool .................................................. ..................... |
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