8 line min
16 max
no pre-writtens
check -in
ill spit first

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HOLLA AT YOUR BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's Marvell man don't act sassy// Or i'll leave you like a used tampon, stiff, bloody and nasty//


"Blessings of life to the children, they say life is like 5 days, words of an oldman in a wheelchair, with silver hair, his eyes where bloody, while describing what lies before me, said evil b*tches and jealous men would try to destroy me, it occured to me this old ni99as words couldn't be realler, i'm on top now slightest drama i have to kill ya, cause animals sense weakness, sharks smell blood in water, ismail mosses and joe, move in devine order, sh*t is plastic material having no life, crash whips and leave 'em know matter the price, as long as I survive hop in the five, circle the block where the beefs at and park in front of my enemies eyes, we see that it's war we're gods children, see what we livin is real, aint no heaven or hell, dead is dead f*ckers, and your soul is with god, your mind keeps lurking the earth watching your own murder reoccur" - Nas

make that a 10 line minimum
waiting for you to check in
remember no pre-writtens
good luck, (YOULL NEED IT)

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HOLLA AT YOUR BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's Marvell man don't act sassy// Or i'll leave you like a used tampon, stiff, bloody and nasty//


"Blessings of life to the children, they say life is like 5 days, words of an oldman in a wheelchair, with silver hair, his eyes where bloody, while describing what lies before me, said evil b*tches and jealous men would try to destroy me, it occured to me this old ni99as words couldn't be realler, i'm on top now slightest drama i have to kill ya, cause animals sense weakness, sharks smell blood in water, ismail mosses and joe, move in devine order, sh*t is plastic material having no life, crash whips and leave 'em know matter the price, as long as I survive hop in the five, circle the block where the beefs at and park in front of my enemies eyes, we see that it's war we're gods children, see what we livin is real, aint no heaven or hell, dead is dead f*ckers, and your soul is with god, your mind keeps lurking the earth watching your own murder reoccur" - Nas

checkin in g2g but i'll drop tommrow so you can drop later or sometin .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................

I spit fire leave your "retinals sour"/
Leave u invected, so your computer aint the only thing with "technical problems"//

Leave you headless like "Miguel Hidalgo"/
Have u missing on the milk carton like , "Where the hell is Waldo?"//

Im an allstar, can "pitch for innings"/
While your steady trying to ride horses like you are "Richard Simmons"//

Boy im a monster with dirty "intentions"/
Leave your girl with more kids in her mouth than a "barney convention"//

Pay attention as I give you my "thoughts"/
Battle me and you'll be facing more loses than the "ATL Hawks"//

I stand firm, cuz prove "u can win"/
I'm a vet you're a rookie, been rapper longer than "Yu Bin"//

You've "been feeble" with know "get back"/
Watch your mouth or end up like "Vin Diesle" when your vision fades to "Pitch Black"//

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HOLLA AT YOUR BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's Marvell man don't act sassy// Or i'll leave you like a used tampon, stiff, bloody and nasty//


"Blessings of life to the children, they say life is like 5 days, words of an oldman in a wheelchair, with silver hair, his eyes where bloody, while describing what lies before me, said evil b*tches and jealous men would try to destroy me, it occured to me this old ni99as words couldn't be realler, i'm on top now slightest drama i have to kill ya, cause animals sense weakness, sharks smell blood in water, ismail mosses and joe, move in devine order, sh*t is plastic material having no life, crash whips and leave 'em know matter the price, as long as I survive hop in the five, circle the block where the beefs at and park in front of my enemies eyes, we see that it's war we're gods children, see what we livin is real, aint no heaven or hell, dead is dead f*ckers, and your soul is with god, your mind keeps lurking the earth watching your own murder reoccur" - Nas

What happens if Yu Bin doesn't come fnish the battle .................Marvell.......................... ............

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HOLLA AT YOUR BOY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's Marvell man don't act sassy// Or i'll leave you like a used tampon, stiff, bloody and nasty//


"Blessings of life to the children, they say life is like 5 days, words of an oldman in a wheelchair, with silver hair, his eyes where bloody, while describing what lies before me, said evil b*tches and jealous men would try to destroy me, it occured to me this old ni99as words couldn't be realler, i'm on top now slightest drama i have to kill ya, cause animals sense weakness, sharks smell blood in water, ismail mosses and joe, move in devine order, sh*t is plastic material having no life, crash whips and leave 'em know matter the price, as long as I survive hop in the five, circle the block where the beefs at and park in front of my enemies eyes, we see that it's war we're gods children, see what we livin is real, aint no heaven or hell, dead is dead f*ckers, and your soul is with god, your mind keeps lurking the earth watching your own murder reoccur" - Nas

Ok Ok Here

I Didn't Feel Him Look Name Is Cartoon Character Game....
You Know Your Couldn't To Get Burned Like Paper Battling Flame....
It's Like Ya Dome Fell In A Snake Pit..The Way I Rattle His Brains..
Only Way You'll Ever Be On Top Of Me..Is IF Your Fat Ass Sat On Me Man...
The Skillz He Has Can't Be Found Just Like Good Rappers From Oakland...
You Think The Guns Had Swimming Lessons The Way They Properly Stroke Em..
I'll Smoke Em ...But This Chump Think He Hot Recitin Nas Writtens....
Treat This Herb Like a Human Convertible And Then I'll Really Leave His Top Missin...

aight: real close battle but to win a battle in my eyes, u must have hard hits that continue for tha whole vers...start to finish...

Yu's verse did...
Marvell didn't... he started off nice but fell off towards tha end...

winner: Yu

and Yu: drop ur verse soon or it'll be finished...

here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97559

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my bad, switch it up...

Marvell started bad n game hard at tha end..

just used to puttin it tha otha way....

my bad as hell...

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lol this battle was my weakest but uppin ne ways.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................

uppin this shit yo angel i will drop soon can't rite here after skool prolly but uppin 2................................................. .................................................. .........

uppin this shit again dammit............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

damn. really nice drop from Marvell. especially since its ur
first battle. props for that. you came with nice hard hits. but
you didn't seem to follow thru. Yu hit from the start to the
finish. so thats wut gets him my vote. but honestly Mar.
nice hits, shulda challenged sumone with less experience.
props to both
vote-Yu

peace

yo i think yu won this because of his harder puched and easier flow. my vote overall goes to yu but a good battle.

return the favor with a vote on this i need one more vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97852

uppin this shit just need 2 freakin votesso........................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......