Crew Entry Battle To DOI

Only DOI members can vote

^^rule made by alias and agreed on by both battlers^^
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15 lines...30 min blind spit

5votes

all votes must be explained in detail

Either break it down bar by bar or use these catagories

opening -
flow -
struct -
punches -
metas -
multis -
complexity -
wordplay -
vocab -
closing -

overall:

Explict = /10
Alias = /10

My Vote -

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Check.. Check.. Check.. i'l be back to spit later on in the day.. i have some work to take care of 1st..

Peace

yo yo, checkity, in..............................................yo is you there explicit....................... im keyin my shit up right now............................................... ......................

your battle wins, i see 10 wack emcees, loss list, an see 8 of the best,
like you is int the matrix, you plugged in my system your mind i posess,

you gon get slammed through windows, like computers on microsoft XP (avy),
like dead people walkin and talkin again, is your chance of beatin me,

15 lines, bar at a time, is that too much, soap for you to handle,
im waxing this kid, like danny zuko*, when you get to my burnin candle,

x-plicit, you just wanna be a carbon copy of the parental adivisory sticker,
but parents hte you, loner, only way you seein breasts is to pay a stipper,

take you to my personal zone, put ya with pain, so that you isnt all alone,
seems to a loss or 8 your prone, since you join, you still aint lyrically grown,

like a law statute, i bind losses, to wack rappers like criminals,
these is just a lil glimpse into my punch chapter, merkings R inevitable,

Fuck 15 lines, im goin 14
your just a member of your crew, lookin for some unhandable action,
like bad drivers, yous gettin cut up so many time u should re-name urself fraction