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Old 12-15-03, 10:58 PM   #1
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- The Rebelion PT.4- Sabato

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THIS IS DONE THROUGH THE EYES OF SABATO.


A lone figure stands in black
amist the rubble and wreckage with "C" eched on his back
the infamous uniform with the royal blue stamp
Sabato was one of the few to escape from Fancy's prison camp
his brain capacity woulden't accept the propaganda rapsody
that fancy fed him happily
but not by person because "C" loved his anonymity
inmates were daily brainwashed with the upmost sublimity
sneekily undetected by the unseeing
though Sabato was uneffected his only thoughts were of leaving
and that he did putting his plan into focus
he quickily subdued the guards with lyrical hypnosis
after gaining the passcode
he then put them to sleep stole a uniform and ditched his old clothes
finally after sabato had defied probability
he had to find the rest of the mc community
the seeds of rebellion had been spread by poets across the galixy
underground clubs under the guise of factories, the remnants of war hid them masterfully
before entering he discarded the uniform that held him in captivity
As Sabato opened the door
he noticed someone on stage he thought he'd seen before, adorned with the scars of war
as he sat down the door reopened and the crowds expression was sick
one word was spoken by the familiar face "Remix"

memory bank error !!!!
message hack activation 50%
80%
100% message hack activated!!

"open your mind there is much you need to see"
who are you
"my name is of no importance but you may call me ABASI"
just who are you supposed to be and why have you come to me
"listen what I will send you will aid you in the downfall of C
what you have in you is key to our survival
and crucial to the revolutions revival
begin download!!"
30%
50%
70%
90%
100% download complete
message hack completed

.......What the hell happened?

PART 5 WILL EXPLAIN HOW THE DEAD ABASHI IS COMMUNUICATING TO SABATO.
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Old 12-16-03, 03:59 PM   #2
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks
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Old 12-16-03, 09:43 PM   #3
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thats ill my twin the saga continues lol i love how you connected all tracks
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Old 12-16-03, 10:21 PM   #4
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REPLIED TO: RULE, WORD~P., B.I. DETAINED
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Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/
So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S.
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Old 12-16-03, 10:22 PM   #5
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DAMN that shit was tight, All your tracks are tight as hell, keep it up

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Old 12-17-03, 08:04 PM   #6
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yo quit sleepin muthafuckas.
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Old 12-17-03, 08:17 PM   #7
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it was okay...saw better by nuclear concepts, this got a 3.3/5 and you need to work on Line Balance...Peace
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Old 12-17-03, 08:57 PM   #8
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good piece, you had a lot of good lines, very well done and creative, keep it up mayn, pz
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