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12-16-03, 10:32 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Nuclear Concepts.....rap Game
IP: 16F6 E7E9
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99113
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99080 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99298 wen i come out how many people will wanna copy? mayb thousands or million, hundreds probly u can't stop me im unstopable theres no stoppin me people will wanna emulate and come out wit another sloppy me even if i get fucked up and even almost die chances r still slim even after that im-a do this as a fuckin hobby till then till when? till death. its such a scary thought no joy can bring it bak not even a present that u bought this is a hobby no amount of money can bring bak the joy i enjoy entertainin i don't fuck i'll do this even if im unemployed money doesn't mean anything 2 me it ain't y i entertain that y other peoples do it then they think im insane i don't entertain for dead prsidents i can kill them on my own if u piss me u don't wanna do that so just leave me alone i be controversal non-commercial causin damn infernos meltin mics in my hand but still u need 2 learn tho ring ring u need 2 wake up dammit and finally realize half the people and stuff out there is just spreadin lies life isn't all about havin a party wit bicardi and lemons ice jewlery hard liquor with drunk women or money spendin show respect to women life ain't all about gin and juice sippin or careless livin or hater killin it ain't how im livin album sellin so just quit all ur fuckin yellin stop it cos dammit i don't care about ur weekend or wen u bust sum caps in sum weak men so since ur up all night go to sleep then or just shut up and sip ur sweet hen i hope ur listenin cos my mission isn't 2 change ur life but strike more fear in u than the assholes that crucified christ wen he ressurected on the 3rd day let me get 2 my point and get at wut im tryin 2 say i don't care if u don't listen 2 me cos im not baked wit a "tight" beat i don't listen 2 radio i don't know wut that is cos underground runs my streets its how we be naturally commercial pop is nonsense cos all is sed is how money got spent not done yet i need sum feedbak and tell me wut needs 2 be wrked on
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It wont be the same since we touchin the game, Make the hardest thug in your crew tuck in his chane, You think this shits a game and im bluffin for fame? Ill squeeze off this tech till nothin remains Latest win-Wiggadave 5-0 KO <center><marquee behavior=scroll direction="left"scrollamount="5"><font size="5" color=red>.:NUCLEAR CONCEPTS:. We are the worlds most dangerous niggas alive, All of my niggas bang with us and lets ride </marquee></center> |
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12-16-03, 10:32 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 19AF 50C1
yo this makes the mind think i like that you delivered clear consiece an kept me glued this was mad ill
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12-16-03, 11:34 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 7733 7AF9
yo i actually liked this piece right here. wasnt sure at first and thought it was gonna be another "im the shit" kinda thing. but the content developed and went off a little into your own personal views and emotions. i like that kinda shit that just flows with your mind. good job.
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12-19-03, 05:05 PM | #4 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 16F6 E7E9
thanx for the feedback uppin for some more
*****ONE*****
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It wont be the same since we touchin the game, Make the hardest thug in your crew tuck in his chane, You think this shits a game and im bluffin for fame? Ill squeeze off this tech till nothin remains Latest win-Wiggadave 5-0 KO <center><marquee behavior=scroll direction="left"scrollamount="5"><font size="5" color=red>.:NUCLEAR CONCEPTS:. We are the worlds most dangerous niggas alive, All of my niggas bang with us and lets ride </marquee></center> |
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12-19-03, 05:07 PM | #5 | |||
Mona Lisa.
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IP: 8372 BD38
i thought it was a bit ermmm..ok!!
nuttin special coz there wasn't nuttin complex about it it was a str8 forward rhyming pz...but you did have an aight story not bad overall..jus keep elevating.. pz
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12-19-03, 05:21 PM | #6 | ||||
Word.
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IP: 9C1E 2B43
Yeah this was alright....your structure in this was alright i thought, it could use some touching up though in some spots....your vocab in this was alright i thought, could be up'd a bit though i think...flow in this was ok, it fell off at some points but nothing real big...but overall this was alright...keep at it.
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12-19-03, 06:14 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: DF7B C8F7
i liked this...not too complex but not too simple eay on the eyes i think....some nice feeling in ther..yeah not a bad drop inafact good id say...keep reppin...pZ twin
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12-19-03, 06:26 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 1152 17A5
this was kool
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12-19-03, 10:05 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: 6B0C 9DE5
yo i need some feedback on this peace
*****ONE*****
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It wont be the same since we touchin the game, Make the hardest thug in your crew tuck in his chane, You think this shits a game and im bluffin for fame? Ill squeeze off this tech till nothin remains Latest win-Wiggadave 5-0 KO <center><marquee behavior=scroll direction="left"scrollamount="5"><font size="5" color=red>.:NUCLEAR CONCEPTS:. We are the worlds most dangerous niggas alive, All of my niggas bang with us and lets ride </marquee></center> |
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