blind spit
due 30 mintues afta check in
ill check in when u do
3-0 is a KO
no crew, dr, hate votes

NO FREEPOSTING HERE!

check in...............................verse startz, when u check in. 1ne.

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aight then, checkin in

this niggas gonna find out soon that im the man in charge
maybe he thought it was hard to rhyme a word like cannabarz

otherwise a name like cannabarz just seems kind of pointless
check his battle with envee, no one shows up to his appointments

cannabarz is 17 but look at the picture, its like he wasnt able,
to find someone his own age so he resorted to the cradle

its just seems strange that you would actually show that shit off
nobody wants to know how ur sick ass tries to get off

this mothafucka almost 18, and still into cartoons
i hope theres a rematch to this battle, ill look forward to part two

the only way i loose this battle, is if i cant find it in frontlines
no more cartoons for you, now were done with fun time

in an ordinary battle, verse an ok opponent, you need a great suffix
but i dont need one in this battle, not verse this fag that sux dicks

umm... 30 minute time limit, drop soon

Cannabarz will-damage the opponent like malamars from parapalegics
Your a computer-nerd with the use-of-words found in american-secrets
Their'-terrible, KEEP IT at that my passive-raps will burn-your-access
Your ass-will-gasp, because you ain't seein-can like nervous-actors
Your words-are-chapters, noone reads this hoe-exceeds like sickily-clowns
And your trainin wasn't enough of aim, you couldn't target a victory-down!
This kids-from-denver, I've been skilled mid-december your flows-fleshy
So Taciturn will get dusted, not like sand but like Dinero and joe-peschi

1ne.

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uppin............................................. ...........

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wonderful, ur gonna get DQed for going under the line limit

u didnt specify a line limit......................

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it doesnt matter though, fronlines alone has a minimum of ten

oh.. well wahetever, none of my business anyway.. holla atcha boy chyeaaaa

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do u really think i giva fuk..goddamn..2 lines under..o mi god..call the goddamn copz..anyways, may i get some fukkin votes..

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uppin for votes

uppin for votes

Ok

Breakdown

Taciturn…

Ur flow was good..however nothing hard hitting…U need harder
Hitting punches..something clever everything was basic..
Ur best line was
“this niggas gonna find out soon that im the man in charge
maybe he thought it was hard to rhyme a word like cannabarz”

Only because I seen something in that line that was possible of
Creating something clever…


Now for
Cannabarz2

Ok Ur flow was very good and U had very good vocab..I didn’t really
See any punches that hit…or was their even any…However over all
A well written battle verse..
Ur fav Line
“Their'-terrible, KEEP IT at that my passive-raps will burn-your-access
Your ass-will-gasp, because you ain't seein-can like nervous-actors”
That was actually a cool clever punch line somewhat…Ur first line too
Was good..

Overall Cannabarz takes it no hate…Taciturn stay elevating..

Please return the fav and vote here..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...727#post1184727