yo man u know rules

10-12 lines
no hate votes or 1 line votin
no d/r
first to 5 votes win

good luck....................

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delete this please messed up.....................................

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ok here we go

some poeple from tray six, they try to diss
after I serve this sucka, then you'll up to this
i'm gona pass u and then you'll miss me
cuz im alot of things that you'll never be
i'll cook you in three lines like i work at micky D
u cant be reppin sac cuz u just tredin water
in the heat when its a one hundred and ten
you said lets battle cuz you might think im punk
im at my best like lil jhon, im getin crunk
i can beat u ten thousand times, even when im drunk
even though im white i can still spit the funk

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neva mind dont delete this........................k im bout to go right now...........

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yo ill brb back gotta post later pops gotta use comp but i really will have it
fa sho dont think im goona go n rite now alright

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yo i keep my mac clean to blast fiens that try to act mean//
my shits keen to good to go unseen n dont think drunk is when your off caffeine//
ill split your spleen wit flows to clean then let every1 watch like a tv screen//
but now its time to take my rhymes to the next line//
so you betta resign petition me then stand in the picket line//
cuz ill leave you in the state of mind wishin that b4 this battle youd decline//
n wit my nine penetratin your spine climbin up like a vine makin you mine//
me a sucka? i think you need to redefine..dont wanna get ur blood spilled like red wine//
n you couldnt serve me if i was a dinner plate u lost is what i accusate//
cuz i got verbs that conjugate ur fate wont await cuz you ill eliminate//


yo dis is weak but enough to win i think..............

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yo man sorry it took so long too but oh well it is what it is........................

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oops second line is............. n dont think drunk is when ur on caffeine//

my bad......................

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also last line is .....................
cuz i got verbs that conjugate u herbs so ur fate wont await cuz you ill eliminate//

once again sorry for all these mix ups just read it over right now and noticed da mistakes i made..............

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-------------------dude upin for votes------------

uppin needs some votes .........................................

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i'on kno y niggaz ain't votin
yo its ez
disastermaster's structure i did not like..it didn't flo..build ya meta
furoshis..u wurr ferocious..u lit it up wit tha structure and punch linez
VOTE:FUROSHIS

this was really close
dis ok flow good personals u need to work on vocab
fur good flow ok punches some were played a lil u need to work on personals and voc
vote dis barely cause he actually had a personal

yo yall we need some votes on dis..................................

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