This is something I took the time to write. It might be considered a poem, but I don't know. It's some deep shit. It's about how when I was like in the 3rd grade in VT, and I was the only colored person at the whole school. Some fools hated on me for that, but I didn't let that bug me. I also, became really popular at that school, believe it or not. It also talks about how I hate it that almost every 3 years of my life, I move to another place. Which really sucks. Well here it is:

I didn’t grew up in the hood, and didn’t live that hard a life/
I had no need for GATs, cuz where I live there be no fights/
I have a lotta money to spend. But that don’t make it right/
Cuz after 3 years end, we be getting on another flight/
I don’t think it’s cool, to be goin’ from place to place/
Seein’ so many fools, while goin’ from face to face/
Never had the time, to pick up that one good friend/
Where no matter what was said, the friendship would never end/
When I was young in school, I had to deal wit diversity/
I was the only kid not white. Went through all types of adversity/
I got called names… but I brushed ‘em to the side/
I always kept my dignity. I never ran to hide/
After seein’ wat they did to me, did not make me cry/
My peers came to my side, and like the sun, I did rise/
To a level where everybody liked me, and I was bein’ respected/
Bein’ the only black… that’s not what they expected/
Now I’ve grown up… and away have gone those warts/
Football and basketball, next year… will be my only sports/
Sports, rappin’, and death, are my exits from this world/
Only the first two let me return… to give this world a twirl/
When I was young… I never would have expected/
That I could go from rejected to… bein’ accepted/
This rap game… can lead niggas to glory/
This fo real, man… This be my story/

Be honest and lemme know what you think. PEACE

what r u a military kid? As for this post In my personal opinions its a good ass read. screw punchlines and mets in a deep post. Good stuff.

Some Nice Lines there & Nice Vocabulary. Good Shit, Keep Dropping With The Same Sorta Flow. Pe@ce

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Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.

*huggles*...Hehe i know how you feel /me knows this isnt the feedback you want :P

I was the only white girl in a high school for a term...It got violent and i left...I did cry tho

Nice drop...

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that was some nice deep written!

I respect you dog!

good drop "This is something I took the time to write" < not a freestlye then...some good vocab....word play was nice too...work on some mulit' and it will be dope...7/10...good work....keep it up..pz

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that some deep shit.
nice fuckin drop. very,very dope.
nice flow too.
fuck da metas and punches.
nice gettin deep.
the main shit was dat not a lot of cats can relate to it. thats why i liked it. i do have fucked up life. well just by lookin at where im from you could tell its a rough place.
you had good vocab. keep droppin .

peace

That's Some Real Talk.Deep Shit.

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