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Old 07-17-04, 05:00 AM   #1
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21 question (remix) by grandrapper

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21 question part 2

(Hey yo this is grandrapper but I’m doing a remix of a great love song by my man 50 check it out)

Verse 1:

(hold up luv) I gotta stop and talk to you for a second/
This is for you and I hope no one gets in our business/
I wanna be the be the greatest thing to you/
But you gotta let me know what to do/
I’m not gonna get mad at you I’m always going keep my cool/
Baby the last thing I need is to lose you to another fool/
So I’m gonna ask you some question and I hope you answer them true/

Chorus: girl I love and I’m not messing/
I wanna prove it by asking 21 questions/
I love how the way you feel
Girl would you be with me and it’s real/

girl I love and I’m not messing/
I wanna prove it by asking 21 questions/
I love how the way you feel
Girl would you be with me and it’s real/

Verse 2

Girl do you dream about me every night/
Do you think I’m the on that will treat you right/
So when do you want me to teach you how to drive/
I’ll do anything to keep you please just tell me what you need/
When god sent you down to me he gave the best deed/
Would you just let me heart out to bleed/
If you think I’m buggin I could leave you alone/ (girls voice) (no your not baby)
(ok) well when your feeling lonely can I make you moan//
Do you like the love I have shone/
Girl in the future I could see us married and being best friends/
Do you want to be together till the very end/
Baby when your mad at me I hope we could make amends /
Baby you mean the world to me and I love your beauty and bliss/
And I’m always going to love you a lot more nevertheless/

Chorus: girl I love and I’m not messing/
I wanna prove it by asking 21 questions/
I love how the way you feel
Girl would you be with me and it’s real/

girl I love and I’m not messing/
I wanna prove it by asking 21 questions/
I love how the way you feel
Girl would you be with me and it’s real/

Verse 3

Baby I love your style smile and I love you how the way you be dressin/
Baby do you want me to go over when your alone and start caressing/
I got mad love for you baby girl you know I’m not messing/
Before I met you I had bad luck with girls/
They hurt cheated and destroyed my world/
If I were to go through another once of pain would you help me out/
Girl I’m not kid I could show you my love is true and what I’m about/
I could tell you I love you in either scream out shout/
Would you still want me if I were to end up fat/
(girl giggling) Just a simple question you could care about that/
Do you love this song or think my style is corny and whack/
Girl would you love me even more if I was black/
Girl if you were sad or blue I’ll give you a thousand roses/
I’m looking at your pictures in the wall and all of you beautiful poses/
Girl would you let anybody come between us/
In this relationship do you have something called trust/
All this is for you can’t you see/
I love you so much baby/
One final question “would you marry me”
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Old 07-17-04, 05:01 AM   #2
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hey everybody please leave a feedback ight thanks alot peace
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Old 07-17-04, 05:02 AM   #3
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~westcoast baby~
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Old 07-17-04, 05:36 AM   #4
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what part of tha west coast u from?
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Old 07-17-04, 10:16 AM   #5
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ayt now u did a good job flow was nice pretty good style but a hint dont bite other rappers no 1 2 hear u or n e 1 do dat they wanna hear wut u gotta say in ur own style n own words im not critizing it bad cuz shit ws good jus keep wut i said in mind,til next time holla west coast,meets,east coast peace out holla
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Old 07-17-04, 07:00 PM   #6
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ay u ain't gonna get no girls written stupid stuff like that and if u got one u better not show this to her or she's gonna leave u, u an embarassment to the west coast
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Old 07-17-04, 07:22 PM   #7
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your bitch ass is jealous cause you can't find a girl and i read your shit your an embarassment to the west coast
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Old 07-17-04, 07:24 PM   #8
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i bet your faggot ass is from a rich town you ain't no real rapper you fake ass wannabe
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Old 07-17-04, 07:27 PM   #9
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where from you from hood?
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Old 07-17-04, 08:13 PM   #10
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homey u stupid come down to vallejo and we'll see if u keep talkin that shit bitch. bay area. magazine street. and for those who dont know magazine street is tha same hood as e-40. dont be mad cause aint nobody feelin ur lyrics.
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Old 07-17-04, 08:41 PM   #11
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vallejo a bunch of rich bitches live over there omg proves my point just don't try to rap fake gansta
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Old 07-17-04, 09:00 PM   #12
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boy u stupid. if u knew what u was atlkin bout u would know that aint nobody rich that lives in vallejo u fukin idiot.since u talkin all that shit y dont u come down here i'll show u how we get down. u aint got no clue what u talkin about
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Old 07-17-04, 09:04 PM   #13
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u claimin u sik where u from?
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Old 07-17-04, 09:51 PM   #14
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from west fresno bitch
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Old 07-17-04, 10:02 PM   #15
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ayt dis a rapbattles not wut set u from wut hood were u born in controversy fake bullshit hype tlk n shit drop a reply on da song aint no a "disrespect" 2 da west coast every hood different critisize da flow not critisize sum1's thug cuz ya'll soundin so bitch rite now shit hiloarious i laughed da whole time readin da replies after mine i got skill so if n e of u faggots diss my shit u need 2 look in da mirror i got my gurl do u got 1?...ha ha fuckin dick ridaz stick 2 da music,n rememberquite its jus music fuckin morons...damn evey1 on these wanna act tough n tlk shit niggaz sound so damn bitch i swear n dont hate a white guy got betta skill than da origanators(black people)of rap n hip-hop fuckin peons couldnt get 2 my level fuckin idiots yo liek i said ur drop was nice kid jus dont bite 2 many time stick 2 ur own style n flows we kno 50 we wanna kno u holla back youngin
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