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No Crew/hate/dr Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-07-04 at 05:58 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 05:30 PM.

BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 05:32 PM.

writin lyrics wit lipstick is the only way u make ur raps look nice
follow the green cross code 'fore u cross me,always look twice
u just like expired candy, none of your bars make any cents
ur punches r more played than Stevie having one less sense
this nigga battlin me, he’ll get burned worse then a cigarette
his baby momma wantin me, cuz she aint met a real nigga yet
until he has proof of him being ill..... i will just call him wack
cuz last time this kid was ballin.... it was with his fuckin sack

I dont care if you Phillys finest or Phillys most hated
but lookin at ya record this bitch is Past over rated
You might be nice cus ya record 19 and 7
After this verse boy you gonna be 19 in heaven
fuck that land of tha brotherly love
E-dubz bout to get introduce to the man above
This my last two but dog I just started killing you
Dont get discouraged when the votes aint feelin you.

Uppin for some votes aight.

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

uppin

uppin fo some votes, stop sleepin

Voted For: e-dubz

edubz- i was feelin a few metas... some of the verse was filler, but for the most part, it was a iight verse....

bang-you entire verse was filler.. no foreal punches or metas.. work on putting punches in your flow.. if you do that, u'd be strait..

vote:edubz.

if you get a chance, drop a honest one in this:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352
dont care who you vote for, as long as it gets voted on..

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Voted For: e-dubz

lol...e-dubz, no, lemme start wit BANG...u had a good flow, but the reason why it didnt work for me was cause u stuck to one point throughout the whole flow, and that got boring...u had some good rhymes and punches in there, but they were choppy...elevate

now, dubz...i liked your flow from startt to finish, u had me laughin on some parts, and u spread yo punches around ,thats wut i liked the most, u came wit diff. ones, but it all directed to one thing, there was one flaw in there tho, yo third bar "his baby momma wantin me, cuz she aint met a real nigga yet "...that was choppy and didnt go wit the flow, elevate and practice more on that...

overall: both need to elevate, dubz, get outta here, go to elevated, u cant feel good battlin people like this...that was too easy...your record aint that precious...good flow ya'll, keep elevating

dont forget to follow jigga and drop a vote on the battles below...he's showing u the way...i'll return a HONEST vote peoples

Voted For: BANG

illl give this battle to bang........... he had way more personals and punches then e-dubz......... and e-dubz lost me twice in his rhyme scheme...... this battle was close tho, cuz i liked edubz closer, but overall Bang took this battle for me with his personals and aight flow.... no hate tho........ and send sum love over to my battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140521

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

ohhhhhhhhhhhh and also that line with the "real nigga yet" sounds alot like that verse by Talib Kweli in "Get em High" with Kanye west, so i didnt think it was so original

Uppin

__________________
"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

uppin