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.::critical::. 1 16.67%
fluidmoon 5 83.33%
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Old 09-20-04, 11:49 AM   #1
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fluidmoon vs .::critical::.

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Old 09-20-04, 11:50 AM   #2
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fluidmoon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-04 11:50 AM.
 
Old 09-20-04, 12:25 PM   #3
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.::critical::. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-04 12:25 PM.
 
Old 09-23-04, 03:29 PM   #4
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Old 09-23-04, 03:45 PM   #5
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/shacklesmusic.htm

There is my verse, i recorded this real quick coz i wouldn't get another chance to until the weekend or later.
 
Old 09-24-04, 11:04 AM   #6
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c'mon y'all, vote in this shit, tell me how much i suck!!! lmao, critique the hell outta me, so i can elevate...................peace
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Old 09-24-04, 12:36 PM   #7
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...yea Just Droppin Some Feedback For Ma Boy Critical.....
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Old 09-24-04, 02:56 PM   #8
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Voted For: fluidmoon

Umm. Ok battle.

-Fluid:
Delivery was ok off and on at times but did well...i have to say. punches were there....the diss to his soundclick made me crack up..lol

Shackles-
I loved yo beat, but damn get on the beat....ride it man..lol i mean yo words were everywhere..delivery was aight flow could been betta....punches ok...

Overall i think Fluid got this.

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Old 09-24-04, 08:15 PM   #9
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jus checkin' polls...............................
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Old 09-25-04, 12:09 AM   #10
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aight aight.....canna get a drumroll

nice punches...flow needs to be better kinda choppy
but like i said goood punches like that soundclick line
and shackles banging together not bad for ya first audio
critical had some ok punches but quality was ass and
wtf was that line about you couldnt hit a target even if you
had a scope on ya clip? oooo no is that suppose to be a punch if so that ish was weeakk....

thats why fluid gets this...punches win battles
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Old 09-25-04, 10:49 AM   #11
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ok i wasnt gonna vote at first.............. but fluid sounded about 300 times better on the mic then critical/shackles........

"You Don't Belong In Audio Stick To Text fool ..." you shoulda thought about ur flow before u sed that

maybe it was cuz u had to rush it, but either way u were really offbeat the whole time......... ur only good part was that last line............ so fluid has gotta have the vote......... the flow and the shackles line took this, but u might wanna get a better battle beat next time........... thought u were about to sing on it at first with that beat........
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Old 09-25-04, 12:27 PM   #12
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yo this feed back is to both...

i decided to not vote cos both were iight........critical ya shit was better tho with harder punches..but ur voice was a lil too loud(lol)....fluid ya shit was tight too but ya beat wasnt as cool ass criticals...props to both

yo hook my battles up and if poss the 1 with intensify effect.......thanx
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Old 09-25-04, 03:05 PM   #13
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Fluid, girl Ima be honest....I wasn't feelin u on this one.
Ya delivery was kinda blah, and flow was a lil off.
Not much emotion.....Lyrics were OK (like the Madden)

Critical....
Didn't like you that much either. Beat's pretty played.
Ya lyrics were repetitive....Blowjob's was mention'd a bunch.
How ever, You had better emotion and delivery...
Even tho flo was rambled.....

Ima have to go with who sound'd nicer.
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Old 09-25-04, 03:19 PM   #14
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Can't vote on this one, just checkin' the count...
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Old 09-27-04, 10:29 PM   #15
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i gotta say.... i didnt think fluid would be a spitter.. yet i she was spitting her lil ass off haha...

i listened to fluids first: nice appearance by 7/3..aight aight...she was spittin some nice metaphores.. nice job...some pucnehs directed at shackles.. overal a prettyy decebnt drop.. specialy for ya first audio battle... was doin it..

shackles: vocals to loud.. and ya flow was so rushed.. slow down.. get ya point across.. or practice on rapping fluidly but fast...

all in all.. this came down to delivery.. fluid delivered much better... so she gets my vote :-/
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