Battle Rules:

10-14 Lines
No Crew/hate/dr Votes
No Recycling
No Biting and no feedin

g'luck fam

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-29-04 at 04:02 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

DatBoiRob has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 02:06 PM.

Assas-Sin has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-29-04 02:08 PM.

Nigga I Can Make U A President And Me Be An Assasin
Lets See How U Can Hunt And Kill People
When Ya Neck And Ya Head Is Verbally Smashed In
I Can See Ya Pussy 5 Dollar Ass Gettin Cashed In
U Always Talkin Bout Ya Dick And How U Got Tricks
Ill Give U A Case Of Slurred Speech Like Slick Rick
Ya Verse I Didnt Look Cuz Ya Bad Shit Is Attractive
Ima Help Ya Ass Learn When U Lose, Choose A Casket
Dont Let Ya Mouth Slip Or Catch A Mean Clip
Button Up That Lip Or Get Ya Sleen Put By Ya Hip
Nigga Ima Give U A Bib And Put U In Ya Crib
I Better See U Leave Rv For A While Like Takin A Trip
Ya Flow Is Fuckin Jacked Up Even When It Is Bitten
U Betta Grow Up Cuz Im Never Babysittin

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i meant to say
( put ya spleen by ya hip )
THAT IS ALL THE EXPLANATIONS I THINK

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Damn That Was A Wack Verse. I Wasnt Feelin That At All. Pleazz Dont Judge My Talent By This Verse. *yuck*

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C'mon fam how you claimin to be Dat-Boi-Rob
Ya uglyass cant get a bitch so ya sick of being lonely like feild mob
Yung nigga watcha doing takin on Assas-Sin
You gettin a win against me even makes Elvis start laughin
Ya record 0-2 so how eva gonna get to da top
Especially when most of ya ryhmes PLAYOUT like Hood Hop
Im takin it easy on you so nigga dont get full of ya self
You're my book so right about now my punches puttin you back on da shelf
C'mon dawg im ova ya rap game level
Im high as heaven when ya wack ass is low as da devil
But aint meanin ya hot cuz you aint that by far
Ya couldnt be hot even if you where in a ova heated NASCAR
Da votez comin from you iz da only kind dat loves to ride
Cuz when I take ya to da circus all you roll on is da DickRyde

uppin for votez famz...

Voted For: Assas-Sin

Assa-sin:

Punches were too basic man...I think you can do way better than this...Try being a little more creative with ya punches homie...ya structure was fine, as was the flow, and even tho some of your punches were played, they were still better than the other dude...

DatBoiRob:

Punches were not there...I saw not a single decent punch throughout your entire verse...structure and flow at the beginning was fucked, but then got better...Neither one of you guys had any personals...Both verses need elevation...1

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Voted For: Assas-Sin

datboirob:
um nothign great your stucture and flow ere a combined alright....your punches were weak..but it was alright with some of the shit you spat.....no hate but you didnt have a chance assasin is really an assasin word..lol pz

Assassin
hmm pretty good your stucture was ight....nice punches pretty godo with the vocabulary and metaphoical issues...lol....you got this simpley tho....nice work with that shiat....no hate to both pz...

return the favour...thanks...links in the sig

uppin for votes...dont sleep

Voted For: Assas-Sin

aight okay battle ya'll....i think sin took dis bcuzz rob u weren't tryin da be creative fam u aint have no punchlines or nothin n datz like da most important shit in battlin...nahmean...sin u had a lil creativness but ya puncline concepts are played fam or either corny n u gota work on ya ryhme scheme just givin u my opinion

opener-sin...rob ya first bar aint ryhme
structure-rob
punchlines-sin
wordplay-nun
multis-rob he had like 1
creativity-sin
personals-nun
finisher-a tie both were kind of weak
enjoyed-sin...he got dis

links r in da sig...return da favor ya'll

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

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^^he's scared.lol

uppin for votez famz...

still uppin for votez fam...leave link and ill return da favor