Yeah..ya damn rite...
Ill.Logic-Blue
D.Truth-Red

Im about to clear ya conscience..ya gon *fade to black*
and i'm like Hova i got the people sayin *the truth is back*
we come and spit sick...then the fans want more*
And we drop "legendary flows" like tupac pissed on the floor*
Don't trip offa da structure or da presentation jus look at da flow
Cuz god's boy father's hoez and the truth iz iller den Biggie wit da common cold
We rip through the om thread and rip up your collaberations*
And commense to tear apart your internal organs like the game operation*
...like 3 minutes later...cuz i'm slow wit da bar....
come bow down to the greats..look *clear* thru yo *dome* and reveal ya fates
fuck the paper chase...refuse to drop weak tho i may drop late
split ya brains in half...so ya thoughts are divided*
Cuz ILL and D is ownin the worlds like kelz n hov re-united*
I'm slow wit it..so u hear ery word dat penetrates ya mind....
And Dis Collab Iz LIke Kellz And Hov...Jus an Audio CrimE!
comin at u full force like we just blew up the throttle*
I rep my crew...Sm's walkin down ur way...jus like super models*

- -- -and that...iz werd....

More Ill. -Truth collabos on da way bitches

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and yes i wanted to 3-d effect bitch....

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ima come with tha second link......damn D...fix my structure dawg.....lol....u should know how its really suppose to be

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aint that a bitch..........no1 wants to leave feedback

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decent drop.........pretty well written with tha back n forth format. thats somethin i havent seen in awhile especially not in here. structure could've been better tho and tha last punchline was kinda hard 2 follow. all in all tho its enjoyable so i give it a 7/10. RETURN THA FAVOR in my open mic Freestyle. thanx in advance........ 1

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All Out Warfare open mic
me vs. magical

5/10 vocab lacking work on it
punches ddit hit very hard
flow was good thats about it

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Lost in Directions

Stress has kilt best to confess guilt in college we’re taught
How to acknowledge fault, life not built on garbage we fought
In hopes to taint gatts try acquaint cats with stuff to read
Wear bling and share things, bring local facts into contact
With plain brains of dudes and dames and make it a global act
We let butter fly and utter a cry like Parkay and that sparks the way
Greasy script got a sleazy grip on bread by Mary Jane draw art all day
Have fun in parks let our big guns bark like RAMBO
With AMMO shoot M60’s salute Bill Bixby cats get slam yo
“So MADD we came with aggression just to gain possession
Of microphones, to cats our profession unknown gave suggestions
To the dumb weak from streets, we acquire fire from grammar
And desire glamour to rock a stage in a hot rage and hammer
Blaze and slander A crowd loud and proud get standing ovations”
Make bargains don’t like fake margins like on line paper
Blind vapor in your eyes as we pour vibes from design skyscrapers
Onto sidewalks our pride talk while you all collide with chalk
Anticipate your twisted fate leading you wrong into cornstalks
Group nouns into a large menu formation and barge into conversation
Like politicians in debate our ammunition is great here’s a demonstration

^da fuck..fixing it mr. ill logic....sorry ..lol..i liked it fuck'd..

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its good............just hit enta after the *.................and its str8........

madrapper...ur a homo

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ay...dis was pretty dope 4real...im a nigga dat really like collabs and yall was on point...good topic and flow...vocab was aight but was still there...7/10...and dats real

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and make sure yall return tha fava in my colla wit -RIOT-...link in tha sig...~1~

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yea I was having a hard time follwoing this work on ur vocab and imagry but everything else was ok.

5.6/7

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