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Old 11-14-05, 12:28 PM   #1
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*Is It Worth It *

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Quick Track i wrote and recorded . i made it a free download and for some reason it seems to cut the outro just misses the talking...if you d/l it itsll all there
Is It Worth It
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3075822&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3075822&q=hi

or visit http://www.soundclick.com/jonezy


Im gettin the links now

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Old 11-14-05, 01:33 PM   #3
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bumpin this ..leave your links and ill hit um up
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Old 11-14-05, 01:46 PM   #4
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Ayo

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Werd@Uk....Uk Rules -_-

Flow Is Dope

Delivery Is Nice,Worked Well on The Track

Presence Is Good Seem Very Comfortable with THe Mic

Lyrics are Dope

Werd@The Hook Its Dope


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8/10

Plz Rtf On My Pray For Me Ft Intermental Track

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Old 11-14-05, 02:14 PM   #5
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Cheers boys..appreciate it and ive hit both your links
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Old 11-14-05, 03:57 PM   #6
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upping this..leave links
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Old 11-14-05, 04:03 PM   #7
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the beat would more fit r n b cuz it had no base line so it's like ehh ya know. if it had a base line it'd be mos def good. your lyrics aint to bad actually, like that. your flow is a lil to solid slow it down so it would fit the beat better ya know. your emotion aint bad but could be upped specially for a track like this. your deilvery aint to bad either, not bad. the hook is meh the lyrics wit the hook aint fit to great and as well as your flow. but overall this was good, nice job specially for being from canada...you still on rb man?

ayyo can you rtf on my new track?
it's on the first page.

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Old 11-14-05, 06:11 PM   #8
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Lol im british. yeah im still on rb
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Old 11-14-05, 06:31 PM   #9
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i listened to this on rap battles... I love the quality... the song its self was hot and u flowed well with the beat. So I guess it really was worth it lol
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Old 11-14-05, 08:09 PM   #10
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Thx man i dropped my feed on ur track on RB aswel
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Old 11-14-05, 09:32 PM   #11
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alright peepin it now

Production:The beat is hot as hell....overall this is a dope beat-8/10
FLow:you gotta hot flow i was feelin it all the way through-8/10
Quality:You got some good quality as well....who mixes ur stuff? LOL - 7.5/10
PRessense:I was feeling the pressesne all the way through it was cool - 8/10
Voice:Your voice is cool u gotta an accent that doesnt overdue it - 7.6/10
Overall:Overall this is a pretty cool track man somthing i could see on a small mixtape or somthing its cool - 7.7/10

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Old 11-15-05, 12:16 PM   #12
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thx man..upping
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Old 11-15-05, 01:08 PM   #13
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yeye ive heard you before...


beat is ill... lyrics are decent... nice story to it... flow is on point... emotion is iright for this sort of track... decent verse man......

u a scouse? hook is iite it's missin suttin though needs a bit more emotion...

second verse is just as good... flow is pretty kool i like it.... liking the lyrics good shit

hook....

outro is kool...

overall good shit man, like the track... keep droppin em
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Old 11-15-05, 03:11 PM   #14
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nah im welsh..thx for feed
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Old 11-15-05, 06:50 PM   #15
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