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Old 12-12-05, 04:22 PM   #1
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FUCK LL - CS on top-

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I heard kids should respect there elders, so raise the fuck up
CS told LL to Look, but they had to gaze the fuck up!
so far above them on the food chain,they not worth masticating
kids tried for text diss tracks, dickriding? nah,thats the hating
leader,s B u ad- vertising of how gay you really are
oh weLL.. they relised the dieng,so they took to the greatest
even if they dissed us in audio, they still couldnt cross fade this
taking shots at the top is your last glimer of hope
taking on willa was suicide your might aswell give her the rope
I guess you thought santa was coming early...to deliver the hope
you wack tactics came back backwards the fact that wack kids
lack hits like basball strike outs, this is the case called lights out
like a judge examined your diss, LL dead, so you cant be damaged by risk
thats why you managed to diss what showed no
acknowledgement
your crew forums bout to be deleted, I guess even strobe relises he needs to abolish it
unsure why i even took to these amature kids,you should manage ya fibs
double L, guess we understand why your crews dead and faded
trouble now? confess I underhand why you crew fled and downgraded
and if your looking for meta and punches, you better just pass this
effortless key, cuase the better this be,shows how much your worth
so i dropped wack to stay on your level, fuck LL. now lets break cookies and settle

lol, no hate,just had to stick up for my girl willa


leader,s B u ad- vertising = play on daubs name, for those wise guys.
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Old 12-12-05, 04:34 PM   #2
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flow fell off on some like inbetween bar things, and dont talk about dead crews...

TC and Old Skool...loll

Pretty solid anyway.
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Old 12-12-05, 04:37 PM   #3
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lol this aint beef, but if you want to get TC involved it shall be.

and TC aint dead bro. dont get it twisted.
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Old 12-13-05, 03:19 PM   #4
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Drop two links or this will be closed
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Old 12-13-05, 08:24 PM   #5
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the shit didnt rhyme htroughout da text yo cs aint shit ya'll was on my dick when i first entered this site as raw killa than i see ur bitch ass talkin shit yet again bout me cuz my flows better than urs in every way possible gravel 2 ur god nigga gods of war willstr8 fuck ur mic up...lol prank call ur fake ass n leave a message so u et da mic anger in feedback ova ya sparkin speakers...u nigga got a lot nuts or jus dumba than a mothafucka comin at me the way u did in my member mugshot thread cuz u dont wanna fuck wit me period hell my fuckin dog could spit sumtin more fierce than u could eva fathom bitch get at me bitch if u wanna settle this pointless net beef fake ass thug tryin 2 act tuff ova da net lmmao u a clown nigga word
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Old 12-13-05, 09:24 PM   #6
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Naw No Rhyme Pattern At All This Can Easily Be Considered As Effective Writing Next Time Try Harder But Don't Quit Just Keep On Trying
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Old 12-13-05, 11:32 PM   #7
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Although I'm In C.S. As Well I Have To Say I've Seen Better From You Ysdat. It Fell Off Flow Once It Got Into The Second Bar. The Message Got Through But With No Rhyming Pattern Basically Due To The Lack Of Flow.
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Old 12-14-05, 12:01 AM   #8
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ill shutup lol
ysdat cool to see you looking out it was better than daubs diss lol
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Old 12-14-05, 10:22 AM   #9
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ill shutup lol
ysdat cool to see you looking out it was better than daubs diss lol



hop off the mans dick and audio battle me...
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Old 12-14-05, 12:11 PM   #10
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ill shutup lol
ysdat cool to see you looking out it was better than daubs diss lol

Lol......It Is Good To See Ysdat Looking Out For The Crew............
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Old 12-14-05, 05:35 AM   #11
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for a text diss, the flow was off and shit didn't really work that well, you used multies in there but at places it didnt help, this diss works more as an audio diss the way it flows, which is probably what Ysdat did, so I'll look at this as the words for a potential audio diss and break it down....

the flow was nice, multies had good affect, punches were cool, the usage of large words was pretty irrelevant because it didnt really add to the diss, just made your rhyme scheme seem a little more complex, but i'll score it as....

for a text diss = 3/10
but,
for words to an audio diss = 6/10
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Old 12-14-05, 10:20 AM   #12
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She can stick up for herself

And she prolly would have done a better job too...

Agree with Nick on this one though, would've been better in audio man...not text...
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Old 12-14-05, 02:25 PM   #13
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mine was shit...

...and was better than that.
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Old 12-14-05, 02:38 PM   #14
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lol @ this still being alive. This wasnt spose to be dope fools
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Old 12-14-05, 02:52 PM   #15
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init.

I got stick for mine, i was jus keyin gettin shit started lol.
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