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Old 01-18-06, 10:34 PM   #1
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Smile FEATURED TRACK FEB 9-16:"Lord, I want to live again"...Gdeuce and Tha Q...holla

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Intro: GDeuce

Hook: Written and Performed by Gdeuce

Verse 1: Gdeuce

Verse 2: Tha Q

**The producer make the 2nd verse 26 bars, so Deuce and I split them.

After my verse, Deuce spits for 4 bars, then I finish up with 6.

The track ends with the hook.


COncept: Gospel/inspiration themed track...Honest confession to God and one's self.


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Old 01-18-06, 10:37 PM   #2
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Aight...peepin this out now

Production:This beat is a guitar beat...i dont like the guitar beats:6/10

flow:1rst:was ok....the flow fit but voice didn't fit the beat,2nd:damn this was good..i was feeling this more...most def.

emotion;1rst:had good emotion most def. it was hot,2nd:yeah i liked ur emotion it was good.....u sounded like u meant all of what u said

pressense:1rst:for this type of beat yeah it fit it good,2nd:Your pressense was wow..iit was illy on this track..nice


Overall:This is a ok song ...nothin i'd listen too too much.its alright
7.5/10
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Old 01-18-06, 10:38 PM   #3
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g duece sound solid here.. intro decent..verse sounds a lil over mixed but the dubbs work well hook and vibe are real nice different aspect right here that rapverse hasn t seen q voice come in real nice sounds real good dubbs always solid verse is reallll good job here by yall i think its a turn for rapverse and another dimension added holla atcha boyee
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Old 01-18-06, 11:43 PM   #4
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Old 01-19-06, 11:08 PM   #5
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Old 01-20-06, 07:02 PM   #6
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damn, this beat is fire! I like the intro sayin a nice prayer, that's dope. I'm doin a track to god as well but it's not on a sorrow type beat, I'm kinda makin it seem hype and shit. but this was good. I wanna collab with both of you sometime but shit I'ma say it like this both of you compared was good 2 different flows, 2 different deliverys. I have been feelin a lot of deuces shit lately. deuce you had a dope approach wit your lyrics, the hook was even pretty dope. Q I thought you gave the track a real twist with your fast flow. your lyrics were also good. overall dope track so I downloaded it. I'ma listen to it a lot now.

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Old 01-20-06, 08:39 PM   #7
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^^I don't recall flowin fast...but, aiight



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Old 01-20-06, 09:55 PM   #8
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the beat is cool....1st mcee the flow is a little to bit slow....lyrics are felt though like Slug....delivery is laid back with a emotionless monotone....chorus fits the track...second mcee outshines the first....the flow is a better....delivery is better and the monotone is dope....lyrics are felt...nice track

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Old 01-21-06, 12:45 AM   #9
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Old 01-22-06, 04:32 PM   #11
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word to another gospel song =P lol.. the intro was dope.. the beat im really feelin. .iono really on how u find all these great beats fam lol.. the lyrics were very good.. you always pull something new with every new song u make man.. much props... delviery was great and everything.. oh and this goes to both emcees in here lol
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Old 01-22-06, 07:11 PM   #12
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Old 01-23-06, 08:10 PM   #13
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Old 01-23-06, 09:03 PM   #14
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damn G Deuce u got a SICK voice.. damn.. lyrics are HOT, flows sick, deliverys hot, damn dood, we need to collab fo real! holla at me man (aim: ShawnPhillips905)

hook- lyrics r pretty coo, its pretty hot.

Tha Q - pretty hot too, i think ure quality through this off, but the lyrics r pretty coo, deliverys nice, emotions coo.

and this beats fuckin sick, hook me up?

anyways, tracks hot, im feelin this lots. nice drop fa real
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Old 01-24-06, 06:56 PM   #15
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G Deuce sounds like Scarface on this one. I'm liking the verse you spit on this one. You could have used a little more presence than you did though. Q came with some better delivery. I'm def feeling this track though.....

Q.....hit me up for a collab on this religious tip if you want
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