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Old 03-04-03, 12:50 AM   #1
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9-11 (work in progress) Hit this post

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i'm always staying higher than attacks by the al-queida/
the jet fuel causing fire and mohammed was the driver/
sniper roaming the the deserts of Afganistan/
supporting the attacks when your buying all the contriband/
their main exports include heroine and poppy/
I'll kill bin laden do a drive by in my Jalopee/
don't copy flying planes into our buildings/
you spineless bitch your killing women and children/
i'm a take Kabul, Kandahar, and Bagdad/
throw them in a grab bag my flags at half mast/
tourists gassed taking pictures of ground zero/
FDNY has become my new found Hero/
forget Dinero but never the date 9-11/
too many innocent people reached the gates of heaven/
we'd blow up your buildings but you need some to do so/
Sadam and bin laden more homo than Manudo/
history repeats itslef ask Sadam/
Fuck Iraq, Afganistan and the Taliban/
Fuck Iraq, Afganistan and the Taliban/
Stay Calm/
You need to watch and listen Bin Laden Had a vision/
Fuck the Al-quieda network stay playing your position/
he said he seen it the twin towers collapsing/
at 9 am on 9-11 i watched and started gasping/
grasping for some reason behind this discription/
started WW3 us against terrorism/
Bush give me control i'll end the war Faster/
I'll shut em the fuck down Like DRE did to napster/
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Old 03-04-03, 04:36 AM   #2
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gotta love it... its worthy of an ill and a dope this line was dope too
"I'll shut em the fuck down Like DRE did to napster"
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Old 03-04-03, 06:22 PM   #3
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zzzzzzzzzzz sleepers hit this post
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Old 03-04-03, 06:37 PM   #4
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shits hot
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Old 03-04-03, 11:09 PM   #5
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thanx but where is the breakdown i need some feedback stop sleeping
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Old 03-05-03, 03:03 AM   #6
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uppin
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Old 03-07-03, 12:19 AM   #7
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uppin this shit
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Old 03-07-03, 07:13 PM   #8
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zzzzzz common sleepers where's the criticism?
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Old 03-08-03, 11:25 PM   #9
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niggas keep sleeping thats why i'll rip anyone on this site in battles
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Old 03-08-03, 11:36 PM   #10
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that was hot shit man
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Old 03-09-03, 06:47 AM   #11
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That shit is fucken awesome man, DOPE, DOPE, DOPE, I'd had a look at this before and not really read it in full and didn't think much of it but I just read through it thouroughly and Dogg, this shit is sooo hot! Wordplay is nice, rhymin is very consistent, one fucken hot piece man.. ^^^Deep, meaningful and for real!!!!
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Old 03-09-03, 07:04 PM   #12
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finally thanx ya'll bout time some one peeped this shit
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Old 03-09-03, 08:31 PM   #13
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I feel ya steppin
flow was pretty nice
there were some lines you could of made just a little different and switched around to make sound better
but I think these 2 were cool
sniper roaming the deserts of afganistan
supporting the attacks when your buying all the contriband

yup, better believe your coming along nicely

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Old 03-09-03, 08:54 PM   #14
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YO SHIT WUs JUst SICKWITIT.....na'mean

FLow was 9/10......NICE
Concept and the whole shit went to the point......Good job
The whole piece i would Say TIGHT.....u got skills man..

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Old 03-09-03, 11:45 PM   #15
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To be honest i think you people are over-rating this. Flow was descent, you stuck to your topic, but it looks like you only have 150 word vocsbulary in tha english language. Overall for a keystyle i rate this about 7/10.
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