normal rules
15 mins to write after check in.
5-15 lines

hey greg, you hyper active lil fag,
take some pilles to calm you down or take a drag/
you new here so i'll go easy on you, but it wont take long
you'll realize that you dont belong on RB.com/
justin helped me with that on, he's a real rapper,
and i'm the real scrapper/
together with the help of the_real_MC,
we'll make y"all see, were all there is to being an mc/
sorry greg, but you gotta prove your worth,
mabie you'll join our crew/
but if you fuck this up,
i'll lock you with teh tigers at the zoo/

what the **** you ant in no **** pine-cone just a puine wanta be you a has been pine cone wit no pine cone

shit i forgot to check in, sorry..................
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and what the fuck was that dude, write a dis towards me........
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uppin for the vote, even tho i dont deserve it cause this guy cant rap....................
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uppin(2) post again dude, we will give that privelidge to ya.
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cris the dis the big fat ***** who like to *** his mama .
you say yuo the candy man you a man cida man
all yuo want is man al night
you need help but i dont i am man and you a woman

try this on for size
i am what ever you say i am but i will never be gay liek you
got more things down south than your ever have in your life

lol, thats a lil better, 1st thing, you cna swear, and 2nd, you dont rhyme by putting the same thing twice, rhyme a word with something else that sounds like it, make fun of me, explain how your gonna kill me, make fun of my mother, i dont care, just do something. read some other peeps raps and you'll learn.

you think you can rap you could not rap your own grap if you have to . well this rap is done hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahah ahahahahahahah

what the fuck? was that the battle? wow what a waste of a thread, u both need to elevate drastically, but given the circumstances pine cone took this, let me break this down.

flow-pine
punches-pine
personals-pine
structure-pine
finisher-pine
enjoyability-pine

yo im the best, man u aint even close, u censor urself out, and ur rhymes r shit, u both need to elevate before ur next battle cause that sucked, but for this battle pine cone took it.

peace......

Wakk Battle..

Pine Took Dis Hands Down..
Won All Categories...Nuff Sed !

Ya'll Both Needa Elevate

thanks for the vote boyz, but i'm not goin all out, i'm just teachin this boy how to spit............
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k greg, when you get back, try a lil longer rap, put one line like for example,
you lil fucking *impersonator*
i'll own you ass like *termanator*.......
.....k try that, do like 5 of those sequences..
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