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5 bar max

ill set it up...since u called me out u spit first

u got 20 mins to spit and i got anotha 20 after that

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

all votes must be explained

Catagories

opening -
flow -
metas -
multis -
punches -
wordplay -
vocab -
complexity -
closing -
my vote -

how come the people who always challenge me neva show up

some one close this

and this is like the 5th time too

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yo peace out....

im in here...check this......

ima post today....

calm down.....perhaps all the people got fear of u......lol
i dunno!

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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

perhaps i would´ve been betta to spit blind.....
but fuck it....i know...u need wins.....

check this.....:

Im goin up on stage surrounded by lyrical n mystical mist n in rage /
wage a war gainst u stand there wit "ballistical" fists and young age //
ure used to go as the snd cuz everytime u stand behind the male / (pokin ass)
a gale´s streamin out my front u try to find me but hit nuttin - fail //
ure shootin wit placebos bitch, u know, words that make no sense /
use ur dense i rock the mic this hard, its eruptin n breakin ya hands //
u get fucked by my slug aint got luck cant duck cuz u get plucked /
cooked by flaming verses gettin half weight crooks like u in hearses, sook //
lucky if ure able to survive the epidemic disease caused by lyrical shots/
MoF rocks not wit gats just polemic, feelin home at worst criminal spots//

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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

iight yo......sorry i didnt relize u posted...

MoF-Ya-Played, Check-Ya-Grade.. "Straight Fs", Cuz youFail To Come "Hard"//
Upset-Ya-Parade, Your Punches are "Weaker" Then "Crashes" Wit "Parked Cars"//
Accustomed To Not "Using-Ya-Feet" Cuz U Have Nothin To "Stand For"//
Confusin-Ya-Speech, "Dieting" On "Rocks" So U Can Have A "Hard-Core"//
Using-Harder-Sayings, Then His Lines Are Gettin Snapped-Like-Twigs//
Using-Proper-Language, *MoF* Still Couldn't Make My I's (Eyes) Go Big//
I'll Call Ya A-Door-Knob Cuz Ya Style Leads Straight Out-Tha-Door//
Givin Credit For Weak Verses Is The Only Time U Step To The Fore//
Like Delivering-Lighting-Bolts EnVy Transmits-Thunderous-Blows//
Then Toss Ya Life Under-The-Remote So U Can Have Shit-Under-Control//

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opening -
flow -
metas -
multis - Envy
punches - Envy
wordplay - Envy
vocab - ....
complexity - Envy
closing - Envy
my vote - Envy Skillz
Not a bad battle. Can ya peep these please? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93603 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779

Aight it's not lettin me poll my vote. Have a MOD put it in. Peace .................................................. .................................................. .....

Opening- Envy (had a couple of punchlines, MoF lacked punches in his opener)

Flow- Envy (MoF's flow was choppy due to a lot of mispelled words that I couldn't pronounce..and his syllable structure didn't match up in each bar...EnVy's flow was a lot smoother..)

Metas- Envy (Envy had a metaphor in almost every line..MoF had some metaphors but they were weak and not as consistent..)

Multis-Envy (again...envy just had more multis, and they were also bigger, better rhymes..)

Punches-Envy (once again....just like the metaphors, Envy had a punch in almost every line, if not EVERY line...for the most part his punches were pretty straight too...MoF had a severe lack of punchlines)

Wordplay-Envy (the Dieting on rocks line was pretty good, and was the best example of wordplay in his verse I think...although I didn't get the proper language line....MoF really didn't have any wordplay that I could decipher.)

Vocab-Tie (both used some decent vocab....)

Complexity-Envy (definately b/c each of his rhymes were more complex...his punches were though prevoking without being too complex...overall his verse was much more complex)

Closing- Envy (without a shadow of a fuckin doubt....the last line about "shit under control" was NICE....a good closer....MoF just seemed like he ran out of shit to say for his closer)

.::My Vote::. EnVy SKiLLZ

Peace

(btw can u drop an honest vote on Emerge Vs. RapidFire)

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it won't let me poll vote either...I think someone fucked up the poll voting system lol.....someone fix that ish..and whoever adds Tag's vote to the polls can u add mine too?

peace

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<center> I.J.L</center>

you gotta be registered to vote on the poll...thats why

thanks for the opinons anyway

uppin for some votes from registered people..............

com on....

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Breakdown
punches=envy..jus try not to use.."..."
flow=both
metas=envy
enjoyment=envy
structure=both
personals=envy
creativity=envy
sustainment=envy
overall=envy
pz not a bad battle at all

yo envy ya shit was tight....
i expected that....
that looks quite straightforward fo u......not a prob fo me....

then lets get sum more votes in here...

peace!

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turn ya back on me, get slapped and lose ya legs...
IM NOT ALLOWED TO SAY: "NIGGA!"

Voice Of Tha Streetz

thanks for the vote brix.....

uppin.............................

and how do u register to vote......i cant figure it out

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ohh shit my bad............................

i went on my boys name accedentily

sorry............

yo sorry bout that............................

uppin #4.................................

com on people............................................ .......

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