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Old 05-03-04, 10:53 AM   #1
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king solo vs. deadly vision

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deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.
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Old 05-03-04, 11:48 AM   #2
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checkin in to this shit!!!
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Old 05-03-04, 07:14 PM   #3
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Blah!!! ya'll kno the drill. checkity check
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Old 05-03-04, 10:47 PM   #4
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here's my shit

Nice record……I guess pre-writin paid off cuz its got ure ass high rankin
And nice avatar……I just got one question, what the fuck is ure mom spankin

Rhymes explosive……have ure head explodin next time u get a Deadly Vision
Alakazam!......I’m a magician and POOF! I just took away all ure ammunition

U never hit……can’t knock shit up cuz like ure nine ure always firing blanks
This ure end……pack ure shit up and leave cuz I make a habit of retiring wanks

Flow is wack……don’t u know that shit don’t work, u better try another way
I be 007……if u drop out this shit right now I might let u Die Another Day

Ass is bored……I don’t need to try, I’m just doin this shit cuz it’s killin time
Bars are stretched…… I know I’ll win cuz all ure ass will be doin is fillin lines

Real killa……u shud understand this cuz I’m a use my methodz to murder u
Never get fame……you been here nearly a year and still nobody has heard of u

Shit predicted……man I got a Deadly Vision that’s how all this shit was planned
Sayin goodbye……I beat u so bad the admin won’t need a reason to have u banned!!
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Old 05-04-04, 07:44 PM   #5
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This will be an easy win...hahaha

http://www.faceparty.com/member_zoo...&img_id=6347124 (His Gay Pic)


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wow ok nice pics i guess
ur a homo i like how u threw up the sing u look so gangster lol


^^Fruitcake You inept-to-cope,Set-to-choke on wat could have been your only hope...
Face tHa Factz, Gettin ME on LD Roster is the only way u'll make a vote..
MM got Seamen that'll rape ya throat,just straight Neverous, im serious!..
Nicky Fletcher..haha You've got less chance of 'giving birth'-to-rap then a 13 year old virgins period..
King??, "You Aint Drugged Yet", ILL Stack This Kids "Organs On Shelves" Leaving His Stomach "Up-Set"...
You Like A Swade Puppy 10-3..Still a noob "In-side" So How He Rocking A "Core-Vet"...

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you the guy are the girl.....


^^Herb I'll Cut your "dick" in "half" cause you "Bi-Sexual"...
You Could "Ram" "Heads" With "Einstein" you still aint "Intelectual"...
Stop lying about your reverse Sexuality, I kno u checking out yo leader Killa bwoy!! but you "Contact-Dick-Son" (Contradiction)..
British bastard from UK!! Enough Tutoring you couldnt practice my Skill "So Dont Master us...
You out of "ammo" and you talk about "Blast-en-us"(blasphemus)"...
Lyrical Destruktion?? Bitch My keystyles just be wild, Go copy and Paste ya Rhymes...
Due date? Throw ya Watch Away Cause you’re a Fuckin “Waste-of-Time”...
Its like a Fuckin Waste of lines, you sound like a preachers high Whines....
Im The Type to shoot Myself in The Dome… Just to give you a “piece-of-my-mind....


The end. Good Bye Biaaatch.
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Old 05-04-04, 07:48 PM   #6
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Votes.
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Old 05-04-04, 07:49 PM   #7
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Wow... Deadly how are you 13-1? Those bars are stretched as fuck, and you have very few well developed punches in all of that... you had that contradiction line that didn't rhyme with anything...

I've seen that watch line before, word for word, multiple times... everything in this battle when King's way I think...

"
Nice record……I guess pre-writin paid off cuz its got ure ass high rankin
And nice avatar……I just got one question, what the fuck is ure mom spankin"

^^ very nice

v/ King Solo
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Old 05-04-04, 07:53 PM   #8
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Votes pplz!!!!
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Old 05-04-04, 08:18 PM   #9
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Hello. Relax it was quick keyd i seen him drop. I taught let me drop. Anywayz. Vote. Cuz Battles should be judged on Punches and personals. Structure...hahaha....
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Old 05-04-04, 08:22 PM   #10
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Yes, but if I typed out a whole paragraph just to get one punch out, that's whack. Bad structure kills your punch, period. Especially because you had a comma every three words, which meant you couldn't develop a punch except by putting quotes in your verse.
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Old 05-04-04, 08:32 PM   #11
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Yeah, I gotta agree with Shadow on this one....

This was the first time I saw either of these guys battle so it was intresting. King solo came pretty hard but for some reason it didn't seem like a rap to me. When I read it, it felt like he was just talkin to him. But the punches were definately there and the flow was ok.......Deadly....I expected more from you and was disappointed. I know that was a quick keystyle but that is what you put up as your verse. I gotta go with king on this one....

Vote - King Solo
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Old 05-04-04, 08:37 PM   #12
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Understandable. King I underestimated ya kid. lol nice battle.
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Old 05-04-04, 09:29 PM   #13
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yea yea nice battle, keep them votes comin!!!!
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Old 05-04-04, 11:41 PM   #14
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Blah!!
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Old 05-05-04, 11:04 AM   #15
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breakdown for king solo:

flow:kinda choppy in some of the bars, they were long lines and not much for internal rhyming to help them 6/10

volcab:good use better then average i guess 6/10

punches:mainly played topics nothing too special my fav,"And nice avatar……I just got one question, what the fuck is ure mom spankin" probably the most played outta the entire verse but it had me laughing 6/10

overall:18/30 well rounded verse pretty good job

breakdown for deadly vision:

flow:kinda choppy liked you were punching in everybar 6/10

volcab:good job way above your oppenent here 8/10

punches:nice lines here a couple seemed alittle played i've read shit like them before but you did good at putting your own angle on them and you got real personal too my fav,"Nicky Fletcher..haha You've got less chance of 'giving birth'-to-rap then a 13 year old virgins period.." good job 8/10

overall:22/30 good job you surprised me with this verse

vote--deadly vision
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