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The Kid P-Dizzle 5 55.56%
Trooper 4 44.44%
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Old 09-09-04, 04:23 PM   #1
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Trooper vs The Kid P-Dizzle

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Old 09-09-04, 08:24 PM   #2
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The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 08:24 PM.
 
Old 09-09-04, 08:44 PM   #3
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I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food...

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime...

(His stage name is Jimmy Pocketz and he's from Detroit "The D". That's all I need to explain...)
 
Old 09-11-04, 01:11 AM   #4
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Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:11 AM.
 
Old 09-11-04, 01:33 AM   #5
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Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
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Old 09-11-04, 01:36 AM   #6
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I didnt hit space bar on the 3rd Bar

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Originally Posted by Trooper

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek
Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals
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Old 09-11-04, 01:58 AM   #7
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

trooper- ummm those punches was weak as fuck. looks like you ran out of similies and diseases and famous people to talk about. switch you style up, its become boring and weak. the simlies and metas werent good at all, thats all i can say....4/10
p-dizzle: ya shit was iight i mean i expected you to come a lil bit harder. flow was off, the wordplay/personal on his aim was iight but not the shit. punches other than that were dope tho so good job mostly.....7/10

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Old 09-11-04, 10:21 AM   #8
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haha that is the funniest shit ever , you merked him ... I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

^that is to funny
 
Old 09-11-04, 04:23 PM   #9
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions
You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions

I took this as you were implying like someone with complete paralysis...and that is rare in most spinal injuries...because there are so many different injuries....so i give it a 6/10

You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines
Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's

why was shyne in quotes? you didn't take that anywhere, you might as well have said shine...the bottom line was ok....7/10

Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech

this was pretty clever, i give it an 8/10

Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's"
u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals

this had me laughin, kind of a played concept, but you were creative with it...so 8/10

over all 29/40



I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz...

the first line kind of lacked, but was picked up by the 2nd, nice work, 7/10

I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper...

this was decent, kinda funny, but nothin special....7/10

This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude
Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food

this was a good multi, good punch, 9/10

Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines
I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime

i got the hate crime line...but i felt it was kind of stretched, so 7/10

as you can see it was a close battle, but kid p-dizzle edged it out by 1 point

good battle, much respect to both of you
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Old 09-11-04, 04:33 PM   #10
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um good battle both were good but not the est ive seen from ya
Troop: um i was feelnig ya shit but ya forgot to space ya 3rd bar um ya lines were streched though ya flow and sturce went good ya punches were really good and so was ya personals

KID: UM YA HAD MULTIS BUT IT WONT DO GOOD YA DID REAL BAD BUT I NO THAT WASNT YA BEST VERSE BUT SORRY MAN I GOTTA GIVE THIS TO TROOP FOR A BETTER VERSE

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Old 09-11-04, 11:18 PM   #11
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good drop both... just checking the polls
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Old 09-11-04, 11:20 PM   #12
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

i'm it was all good both get a handshake but only one can win:

kid the was good wordplay and punch that forsho
nice flow and stlye
nice closer but opener was wack
personals were good
i saw one mult
8/10

J tro great flow but i didn't like the punhes or pessonals it was kinda wack
there were some thing i didn't get
no mult that i saw
nice opener but bad closer
6/10

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Old 09-12-04, 12:08 AM   #13
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Voted For: Trooper

Im Votin For Troop, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Troop Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...
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Voted For: Trooper

Im Votin For Troop, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Troop Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho...


Alrighty then....let me re-vote this again then...

Trooper -
Yo punches were hard and they landed...
Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)...
Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once...
And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all...
8.2/10

The Kid P-Dizzle -
Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also...
Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out...
Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall...
And your vocab was aight too...
7.5/10

Overall
Trooper gets my vote overall iz becuz basically..he had harder punches than Dizzle...a better structure and a nice vocab to it tho...

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Old 09-12-04, 12:27 PM   #15
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Should be 3-2, maybe even 3-1. Uppin' for more votes...
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