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10-12-05, 01:06 AM
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..Rv Sucks..
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The Worst Feeling
IP: CE10 8C0C
Yeh Drop ya verses in here
here is mine The Worst Feeling My feelings are at there worst because my heart has burst And now the tears emerse, im broken and this isnt the first Another hurts done.......from a different person This isnt the first but..........this is the worst one Once again I've become attatched so passionately to another Jus to disocover lies were covered, just like every other lover Your deception left my face smothered in tears, I can't believe Decieved for the last time, I need to concieve a way to some relief I was so naive, I couldn't percieve what was being done to me I recieved the worst feeling because I wore my heart on my sleve Grieving the one who decieved me, thought we had a sort of meaning Didn't think you'd be the one leaving, ya left my heart open and bleeding Nothing as it seems I guess, I don't know if i can handle all this distress Your heart was possesed to infect mine and it was done with such finesse I couldn't let it transgress, ya took me to the limit, its time for an apology I think I deserve one, its the least ya could do, when I gave ya all of me Swept off my feet, balance left wobboly, but nothings being said in regrets But don't forget, what goes around, will come around at its worst I bet For leaving me upset, I hope ya end up becoming a silhoutte of youself So ya can live on knowing ya hurt me, and it was the worst feeling I felt
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10-12-05, 01:16 AM
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[ a.k.a Os ]
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IP: DC6F F211
I like it vocab was on point...your flow was choppy trying to use so many multi's fav line "I couldn't let it transgress, ya took me to the limit, its time for an apology
I think I deserve one, its the least ya could do, when I gave ya all of me"....but overall good piece man.
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10-12-05, 01:17 AM
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IP: CE10 8C0C
^^thats my nig....thanks for the lookout.....but lookout for the full drop.....i hope tomoro
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10-12-05, 01:23 AM
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IP: 2029 97B3
this was pretty good man. you had some good multis. and not just any multis. they actually made sense. cant wait for the full version with Mr. Multies and Malicious.
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10-12-05, 04:01 PM
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IP: 31C2 62EB
Word ill get mine up ina bit.
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10-15-05, 02:36 AM
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IP: CE10 8C0C
hurry and get these verses done....come on now....
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10-15-05, 08:24 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 28AD 5545
my fault i was extremely busy..............sigh i'll type something up right quick and i'll just match your lines not plan'n on do'n anything special i just need some time to get used to this site
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10-15-05, 09:17 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 28AD 5545
The Worst Feelin
I aint gone lie it's intrigue'n me.............in love she was feelin me But it seems that the tendencies.......of the brain currupts memories All i want is for us to be...........its enough for this meanless being Til I came to conclusions.....like why the fuck i keep dream'n dreams See im livid, another page.................surpass'n my trouble'd days Un-seen to the concepts...................so i grasp'em in other ways The last of these ruckest games.......... everlast'n this fuck'n phase Trash'n these visions...............she's show'n passion to other names My feelins was outta place.......................an emotional dislocation Just a friend with priveliges........................ima social association Guess it was known from the make'n......... suppose to kno our places But she took everything from me......................a total depredation But over time...it corroded and molded........cuz it was my only option Everything i held true, was her, but all things fresh are soon to rotten Rose from depression, stress from the thorns, this un-needed nonesense Could careless if she cheated, just no harder pain then to be forgotten bout 40mins or so i pretty much just rushed.........sorry fo it being so late it'll be betta next time but ehh
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10-15-05, 09:18 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 28AD 5545
and yo trace wats good with that sig...........i doubt i can use an avy right now lol but ehh
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10-15-05, 03:41 PM
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IP: 31C2 62EB
Damn im falling behind ill get mine done tonight..thats my word
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10-15-05, 04:35 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 3240 794D
damn lmao ya kno i usually do betta then that most of the time it takes me like 20 mins to do 20 lines thas 1 line a min but ehh.........fuck it its still decent oh and ups to Trace feel'n it homie
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10-17-05, 11:35 PM
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IP: 31C2 62EB
Damn sorry about this homie i got mine
 ..ill post it soon
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10-18-05, 01:47 AM
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IP: CE10 8C0C
yeh you better hurry i wanted this posted last week =/
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10-18-05, 03:58 PM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 3240 794D
so whatcha think............bout my verse............its meh to me lol
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10-18-05, 04:05 PM
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IP: CE10 8C0C
yeh its aiight...i think you coulda made it better......obviously you still have time to cuz mal is takin forever for his verse....-_-
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