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Old 12-03-05, 02:27 AM   #1
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Either drop your verse in here. Or, PM it to me. No matter how many we have, i'm setting the cut off for Dec. 10th. Then it's going in the OM forum.

In case someone doesnt know, the Topic is: The Pendulum Swing. Make it about 16 lines on the topic, give or take. No less than 10 no more than 20.
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Old 12-03-05, 02:28 AM   #2
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And DO NOT make the lines as long as an elephants dick. I hate that shit... even though I did it once. =X
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Old 12-03-05, 02:48 AM   #3
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The Pendulum Swing

..Make note the illusive fluid, as it ripples the canvas stanza..
The tangant phantom grandfather's Tic' inriched bananza
..Include the lucid movement, as it performs to the chords..
Of a life torn in judgement, from the peak down to the shores
It wreaks from pores, engrossed readily.. steadily swaying
As The Pendulum Swings heavily across the aging painting
Staged the blaming, to denounce the compound rash tactics
So I'm constantly placing aim at the surrounding clash of fanatics
To bad it's static, only to my eyes can I see the rue movement
Shrewd and prudent, as I inquire higher and choose to prove it
To loose the trueness, my soul subconsciencly adheres the course
As remourse is here to hear resort to something more heavenly
So brevity heads my leveling, stops to contort a life in shambles
Until one by one the candles, remain unlit as they sit in waiting
..Ever changing like my lifes decisions .. forever rearanging..
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Old 12-03-05, 05:02 AM   #4
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The Pendulum Swing

Supplying vivid emotions with every message in my arsenal
Precious moments are rienforced By the almighty powerfull
Darkness overlaps the sunshine from portraying its beauty
Harvest changing while obtaing my gem Like a saphire ruby
Heartless ideas are swayed by The swinging of the pendulum
Artist hypnotized by The brightness of the magnified spectrum
Mezmorised by the polygons that are falling on my conscience
Realized the controlling of life is the cause of all my problems
I feel free like cactus but the changes of life defies my status
Dying alone cause no one could roam through my apparatus
Percived as harmless the way reality keeps my mind hidden
The pendulum swing scrapes a bit of hope wich is forbidden
The Movement swaying straight foward and back it relates
Rythem Vibrates But Change is what it really demonstrates
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Old 12-03-05, 11:52 AM   #5
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dope shit......... why u made anopther thread bathles me lol : /
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Old 12-03-05, 12:17 PM   #6
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Here is Atty's verse:

Its...nothing, all my fucking emotions fall dry,
eyes lit of fires sit expired to a broken cry.
Living this drift of a life, just, kissing a knife,
slit by depression...blades lips ripping a site.
Everyday consistence dancing an instant away...
wasting in sorrow, hallow...nothing more than plain.
Back and forth teeters the sands last whim,
while the hourglass blackens as the pendulum swings.
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Old 12-03-05, 12:24 PM   #7
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weeeeeeeerd cool shit
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Old 12-03-05, 09:58 PM   #8
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Anyone else planning on dropping on this?
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Old 12-04-05, 06:43 PM   #9
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*yawn* i might *yawn*
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Old 12-05-05, 04:47 PM   #10
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Please...sway away. A majesty aged
under the thunders of tragedies blame.
Wide eyes sustain blunderless paces
left to right, then the shutterless cave in.
Eye lids link together to kiss in a wink's
tether... Letters to the mind find the ink
to edit. Gentle hymns settle just then sing
before, cut short by a pendulums swing.
The wrecking ball falls, its lust dissecting
the wings of all freely seen bisecting
the hours by excepting. Flowers now
wither in there prime, towers down...
The hourglass has now bowed over.
Over and over the past rounds closer.
The last long sands stand to form God;
as his fists twist and become the world's clock.
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Old 12-05-05, 08:01 PM   #11
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Nice drop Chym
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Old 12-05-05, 10:31 PM   #12
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im next..........
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Old 12-05-05, 11:31 PM   #13
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i'll drop for this aswell
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Old 12-05-05, 11:57 PM   #14
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Dope... make it that way too ya fucks'.
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Old 12-06-05, 12:04 AM   #15
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alright this is looking good after mystic and fathoms drops we should drop it
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