Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

10 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.

Sorry this tourney isn't going to last long for you

Wow I Hate Cockiness .....Must Be Why Im Smashin All These Pussies Like You

Checkin In-

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

Yo

I See This Dude Is From "Rockville" So You Know He Bout To Get "Stoned"
He Swore He Was "Hard" Till He Went To Prison And He "Caught A Bone"
You'll Starve For Wins While The Rest Of RV Feeds Off Of Your Losses
I'll Be Takin The "W'"z So That "I" Can See This "N"igga Was Costless
Oops I Just Made His Mouth Drop Like When I Pulled out My Dick
They Say Im The "Magacian" The Way I Just "Call Out These Tricks"
Wow Dude Where's Your Life Your 20 Yrs Old and Your On RV?
Damn I Always Knew That This "Ava" Character Couldnt Be "Archy"
Stay "Focus" Mayne Or Else You Might Be Lookin "Ford" To Defeat
You Trying To "Buy Some Pussy" When You Cant "Afford The Feet"

-Waitin-

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

Lmao...............

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool
N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules
I'm a computer geek man n' its much to ya chagrin
That I use AIM all the time...
... when I want an easy win
So watch as I slap you, you need to learn to rap dude
Fuck a period, even an APOSTROPHE was laughing at you
Ya writing is garbage n' quoted wordplay is madness
But I see your the topical leader...
... when it comes to wackness
Girls hate you which is, why you need to turn on the switches
I filled a verse with personals...
... like what ya need to find ANY bitches

I See This Dude Is From "Rockville" So You Know He Bout To Get "Stoned"
He Swore He Was "Hard" Till He Went To Prison And He "Caught A Bone"
^^^Weak opener
You'll Starve For Wins While The Rest Of RV Feeds Off Of Your Losses
I'll Be Takin The "W'"z So That "I" Can See This "N"igga Was Costless
^^^no
Oops I Just Made His Mouth Drop Like When I Pulled out My Dick
They Say Im The "Magacian" The Way I Just "Call Out These Tricks"
^^^Ight....
Wow Dude Where's Your Life Your 20 Yrs Old and Your On RV?
Damn I Always Knew That This "Ava" Character Couldnt Be "Archy"
^^^okay
Stay "Focus" Mayne Or Else You Might Be Lookin "Ford" To Defeat
You Trying To "Buy Some Pussy" When You Cant "Afford The Feet"
^^^Played closer

Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool
N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules
^^^Lmao...good opener
I'm a computer geek man n' its much to ya chagrin
That I use AIM all the time...
... when I want an easy win
^^^Uhhh...ight
So watch as I slap you, you need to learn to rap dude
Fuck a period, even an APOSTROPHE was laughing at you
^^^Nice
Ya writing is garbage n' quoted wordplay is madness
But I see your the topical leader...
... when it comes to wackness
^^^Nice...i like this
Girls hate you which is, why you need to turn on the switches
I filled a verse with personals...
... like what ya need to find ANY bitches
^^^Good closer
V./Datrushurtz.....this was an ight battle...aimez came played ...ur punchs were weak no hate but u didnt come strong...datrus u had a good solid verse wit good personals an good punchs that werent played it was consistent....good battle

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Trus-
Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool
N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules
Girls hate you which is, why you need to turn on the switches
I filled a verse with personals...
... like what ya need to find ANY bitches

vs.

uh.....nothing

v/trus bye a log shot.

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KORV seed #5

That'll do. This killed & I mean KTFO out of Aimez when Truth didn't even seem he gave much effort. Seriously Aimez.. you used so much old shit it depressed me reading your stuff. People know I hate quotations, well quote what the hell you like, but this stuff . .



. . isn't good.

V/DaTruth

nice feedin there datrus......

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

I didn't feed man...

Feeding is when you make a specific reference to something in someone's verse and reply to it, ie, if you were to say i'm gay then I make a thing to prove I'm not gay.

That apostrophe line was referring to just something in the thread, that's allowed and the opener was close to feeding, but it wasn't specific to anything in the verse so it's not.

I mean, even if I did feed, look at the trash that kid dropped about me catching a bone so who cares lol

yea, i was referring to the opener and that "quoted wordplay" part......... but its prolly not DQ-able anyways

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

Nope, sorry, I'm still here to win the tourney haha

Nah its not feeding.

anyway:

Damn this dude is a tool, learn to read ya fool
N' thx for the DQ win cuz ya didn't follow the rules
I'm a computer geek man n' its much to ya chagrin
That I use AIM all the time...
... when I want an easy win

Vs


a 1980`s style structured verse.


V/Datrushurtz, quite easily