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Old 01-16-06, 07:06 PM   #1
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Old 01-16-06, 07:37 PM   #2
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lol now if only you had girl my nig.......j/m kid whats up. Was really feelin this song it was nice one. Verses was alright. Kinda funny cuz i just did a song to this beat like 2 days ago. Anyways flow was good, chorus is rememerable. Keep doing ya thang on Audio cuz thats where its at for you.
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Old 01-16-06, 07:46 PM   #3
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vocal quality is average at best....

delivery matches the tone of the beat = good

flow is adequte


lyrics appropriate for this type of track...would be nicer if you could come up with more creative symbolism


pretty decent track


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Old 01-16-06, 07:46 PM   #4
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lol i gotta bitch.................. u bitchless homie
thanx fer tha feed
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Old 01-16-06, 07:53 PM   #5
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Pretty decent track..you had a pretty dope beat..your lyrics were pretty average..you could have put a couple good punchlines in it to make it stand out more but it still was a pretty cool track..Quailty was pretty good ..Your delivery was on point and it really caught my attention..overall pretty nice track..keep it up.
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Old 01-16-06, 08:06 PM   #6
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werd thanx fer tha feed bumpppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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Old 01-16-06, 09:35 PM   #7
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are u ready for the rodeo

....... like this beat, commercial tho.... ur voice sounds alil muted, should mix alil better.....

ur flow is pretty nice, quality needs alil help...... nice track for ur girl.... its alil short tho.... kinda commercial track but thats aight

overall decent track
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Old 01-16-06, 09:37 PM   #8
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thanx fam..................yeah commercial werks for me i find it hard to find these type beatz and i dont make em so
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Old 01-16-06, 10:07 PM   #9
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it's a coo track..but.. im not a fan of the flow
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Old 01-16-06, 10:08 PM   #10
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werd wut u mean????????my flows on.................
but thanx i think
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Old 01-16-06, 10:34 PM   #11
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Not a huge fan of slow songs but pretty good overall.Quality was good IMO(i could understand u almost perfectly,slight muffle),Lyrics were decent,liked the beat for the song.
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Old 01-16-06, 10:54 PM   #12
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dude ur makin my left earphone vibrate ......

anyway im gon type while im listening

i LOVE that beat makes me wanna grab a chick and mack it out on the couch
ur verse takes a lil too long ta come in ta the actual song
the flows onpoint all the way and the lyrics are entertainin but could possibly be amped up a lil more in lyrics.
emotions ight cant hate on that..ur qualitys a lil better than usual

defitnly givin u some props on this u made me feel like a 10 year old girl again lol j/k but yo defitnly not bad....8.5/10....keep shining
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Old 01-16-06, 11:07 PM   #14
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Lyrics are nice, but could improve on better ones..
Slow Songs, i like at times if iam in the mood..
Quality was pretty good..
Flow was pretty decent n all..

So pretty much i thought it was a decent track..
Keep up the good work man..
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Old 01-16-06, 11:46 PM   #15
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Word Like wicked said it sick . Could go a little faster.
Decent in all way around, flow was tight lyrics are dope and id say good enough for RV radio.
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