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Old 04-09-06, 10:04 AM   #1
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Old 04-09-06, 10:10 AM   #2
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Old 04-09-06, 01:08 PM   #3
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Old 04-10-06, 01:20 AM   #4
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Originally Posted by KempoMRK
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8. So Rell – The first verse he dropped here people wheren’t really feeling, so I dunno how he’ll do in this league. But he’s a good battler and should do fine.


I know Kempo didn't say a lot, so that doesn't mean much to you
But I just qouted 'cause I'm dead last so WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU
I could make you the Center of attention, but you know what
Your always on the Rebound after you Post Up
You never champed a league so I'm Pleased to help
'Cause with that Sag in your Career you probably need the Belt
My flow is Righteous-mean while your flow is shitty
I'll leave you with a Piece Out not seen since Hippies
You've been rip to bits..shit's ridiculous this whores known
But I'm Diff cause when I Rag on you I'm complimenting your Wardrobe
Your first week First loss, Your Pussy Period I'll abuse it
I say it's 'bout 3 and a Half Weeks before you Douche It

Precize

That's all you get.
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Old 04-10-06, 06:13 PM   #5
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my verse is where ya eyes glued, rellness?? naw..
ya spittin lies dude..
ima be workin the crowd, you'll be workin the drive thru..
ima wordsmith, but you use clips instead, im rippin heads..
in different threads...
told rell to polish up his verse, he pulled out sum lemon pledge..
ima reck havoc on dude, face it rell you need help...
net thug? but since when do gangstas wear seat belts?

you dont Feel Well like critic's eyes toward the ring..
cuz at hells gates..
ya scared to open the Door like ya tooths tied to a string..
with a great stance i break hands, my fist in ya face is
what you'll taste man..
my boys jump Rail more then tonys american wasteland..
barehands have tore spines, fuck ya forced lines...
in battle, this whores mine..
i Picture him slippin up like decals on wet floor signs..
ya lines average, more straight then orthadonist grins..
kids in astonishment..
get a wheel chair, cuz my words pair uh lies like dishonest twins..
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Old 04-10-06, 09:55 PM   #6
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this bitch used a pic thas cheap as hell gimmie a pic I'll redo my verse.
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Old 04-10-06, 10:03 PM   #7
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usin a pic without givin one is a bitch move...plus rell's lines were better...
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Old 04-11-06, 12:49 AM   #8
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I know Kempo didn't say a lot, so that doesn't mean much to you
But I just qouted 'cause I'm dead last so WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU
I could make you the Center of attention, but you know what
Your always on the Rebound after you Post Up
You never champed a league so I'm Pleased to help
'Cause with that Sag in your Career you probably need the Belt
My flow is Righteous-mean while your flow is shitty
I'll leave you with a Piece Out not seen since Hippies
You've been rip to bits..shit's ridiculous this whores known
But I'm Diff cause when I Rag on you I'm complimenting your Wardrobe

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you dont Feel Well like critic's eyes toward the ring..
cuz at hells gates..
ya scared to open the Door like ya tooths tied to a string..
with a great stance i break hands, my fist in ya face is
what you'll taste man..
my boys jump Rail more then tonys american wasteland..
barehands have tore spines, fuck ya forced lines...
in battle, this whores mine..
i Picture him slippin up like decals on wet floor signs..

V/Rell he got this imo....he came wit fresher punchs an his verse was consistent his wordplay was good also it flow'd well..prec ur verse wasnt bad but u could have rip his pic better u had some played lines..work on you punchs..but good battle rell gets my vote
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Old 04-11-06, 12:18 PM   #9
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My flow is Righteous-mean while your flow is shitty
I'll leave you with a Piece Out not seen since Hippies
You've been rip to bits..shit's ridiculous this whores known
But I'm Diff cause when I Rag on you I'm complimenting your Wardrobe

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ima wordsmith, but you use clips instead, im rippin heads..
in different threads...
told rell to polish up his verse, he pulled out sum lemon pledge
with a great stance i break hands, my fist in ya face is
what you'll taste man..
my boys jump Rail more then tonys american wasteland


REALLY NICE BATTLE, I GOT IT ALL EVEN
BUT SINCE RELL DID HIS WITHOUT A PIC I
AM MORE IMPRESSED WITH HIS VERSE
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Old 04-11-06, 12:19 PM   #10
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Old 04-11-06, 05:10 PM   #11
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I know Kempo didn't say a lot, so that doesn't mean much to you
But I just qouted 'cause I'm dead last so WHERE THE FUCK ARE YOU
My flow is Righteous-mean while your flow is shitty
I'll leave you with a Piece Out not seen since Hippies
You've been rip to bits..shit's ridiculous this whores known
But I'm Diff cause when I Rag on you I'm complimenting your Wardrobe

Vs

you dont Feel Well like critic's eyes toward the ring..
cuz at hells gates..
ya scared to open the Door like ya tooths tied to a string..
with a great stance i break hands, my fist in ya face is
what you'll taste man..
my boys jump Rail more then tonys american wasteland..

Not a bad battle.

Rell took it.
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Old 04-11-06, 08:25 PM   #12
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man rell took this in my eyes easily...

so rell

your structure was horrible so i thought you'd be some newb. but the punches actually hit pretty hard and you got good metaphors....the fact that you didnt use a pic and still had better personals took the battle alone in my eyes

7/10

precize.

naww i wasnt feelin the punches.....the punches were basic and ive heard most of it before...the personal wasnt that good..especially with the pic...overall this was an aiight drop..nothing speciall

5/10

vote rell
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Old 04-11-06, 09:56 PM   #13
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Old 04-13-06, 10:58 PM   #14
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You never champed a league so I'm Pleased to help
'Cause with that Sag in your Career you probably need the Belt
My flow is Righteous-mean while your flow is shitty
I'll leave you with a Piece Out not seen since Hippies

vs.

my verse is where ya eyes glued, rellness?? naw..
ya spittin lies dude..
ima be workin the crowd, you'll be workin the drive thru..

I thought that belt line by So.Rell was pretty ill. Other then that, pretty decent battle, but I got So.Rell winning.

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