check, 16-24 lines son. don't go over.

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Yeah, this battle has a line limit. 16-24 lines, so keep to it.

Lmao @ a line limit. That's wussy.

Mimesis doesn't agree so I can't implement a rule if both people don't agree.

The second person MUST match what the first person posts or post lower, if this is not done I will close the thread until the person who posts over the amount PM's me with the lines he wants taken out.

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Y'all can say I'ma terrorist, but really, that shit ain't gon hurt
Cuz the way I'm droppin' bombs on Austin, I'll leave Texas on high alert
I'ma two time tourney champ. So me wack? Forget your jokes
I M list-ed as a great, while yours is just great for getting votes
Your chance of winning's slim, kid. You want personals? You won't find shit
I see my glass more than half full, while you're just stuck seeing from behind it (pic)
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat...
..................................... then check mim's next verse for my punches!

VS

Every week you asked me about lines. . ha, nobody's heard of this kid
But yeah, this is a GREAT battle. .
. .Mimesis versus flipped Mimesis concepts worded to shit
This is a waste of my time. . know you're going to get wrecked quick
Cause the last time you Cena win you had to battle yourself to get it
Fuck excuses. . YOU STILL DID IT. . and you still gonna spit softly
Bringing so many negatives inverse. . it's no wonder you flip off me
Haha, cried to Kemp for HOURS about the lines, your gettin rattled, bitch
You just ain't good enough to go .44. .
. .now that's just what I'm going to end this battle with
So much better than you. . seriously, I'ma just keep beating this guy
I'm the cornerstone of ill. . while cornerstone is where you sleep at night
You're trash. . and with your wack mixtape don't even plan for spinning
Though SPuL's the man of the hour. .
. .cause he has such a minute chance of winning


Mim defo got this.

V./ mim

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Daubs MySpace

yo can i vote i'll give you a dollar......lol.........plus i signed up for next week


sorry for the freepost daubs....lol

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If you signed up for next week I don't see why you couldn't vote. Just do it and then if it comes out that Kemp doesn't want the vote to count, oh well, nah sayen? I don't really think it's that big of a deal.

Y'all can say I'ma terrorist, but really, that shit ain't gon hurt
Cuz the way I'm droppin' bombs on Austin, I'll leave Texas on high alert

-----this was aiight..... even tho u had to explain it-----

You got way to many quotes, your lines are wack, structure's too big
Dude, you're flirting with wackness?...
............................................. More like you're married to it, kid!

--very played....i've seen the flirting with wackness like a thousand times--

I'ma two time tourney champ. So me wack? Forget your jokes
I M list-ed as a great, while yours is just great for getting votes

----well it was a personal...not hard hitting tho----

You used to be a hotshot. You had your riches, but now you're poor
Your dick's kinda like a trolly car.....
.................................................. ............. no one's on it anymore!

-----this was aiight...you could have picked a better setup-----

Speak now if you want me to show you mercy, before I give you the boot
But when it comes for speakin' up for themselves, we all know that mimes is mute

----what does that even mean...that he doesnt speak up for themselves----

40-plus lines? Please... 24 is more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
......but I see your verse beat me to the chase!

-----this was good...best one so far-----

Your sis is such an e-hoe (hijo), hispanics thinking she's your son
So why blow my own horn, when your sister already got it done?

-----na this was wack-----

I'm known to knock out wacks, yo... da raps'll damage ya
I ain't known to put out wack rhymes...
............................................. but today I'm Mim's manager!

----lol...this was cool----

Your chance of winning's slim, kid. You want personals? You won't find shit
I see my glass more than half full, while you're just stuck seeing from behind it

------na i dont really like the whole... use a pic for a punch thing------

(pic)
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat...
..................................... then check mim's next verse for my punches!

-----ok.....i guess.....sorta-----

Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you, rock, papers, scissors... I'll just throw 'em all at your face!

------this seems like a filler.....like somethin u just thought up to fill...jk----
------------------------------but it still sucked-----------------------------------

Dude says he's smart, he's got a lot ahead of him, but no one's seen 'em
Yea, your future's got some bright spots...
......................................... but the rest are waiting for you to clean 'em!

-----------you could have used this against anyone-------------
--------------------not a good closer at all------------------------


spul's verse: 6/10.................











Every week you asked me about lines. . ha, nobody's heard of this kid
But yeah, this is a GREAT battle. .
. .Mimesis versus flipped Mimesis concepts worded to shit

------lol......good opener------

Even you know I'm better than you. . so sit back and just listen
You succumb. . uhh. . ahh, fuck it at least your face will still give in

-------ummm...na.....didnt like it at all-------

On RM you're a joke. . winning by no shows, while I'm smackin' dudes
You're wack. .
. .and that's so Truman that you'll get a Doctrine named after you

--------I didnt really like this but thats just my opinion...lol--------

This is a waste of my time. . know you're going to get wrecked quick
Cause the last time you Cena win you had to battle yourself to get it

--------this was aiight....wordplay was cool-------

Fuck excuses. . YOU STILL DID IT. . and you still gonna spit softly
Bringing so many negatives inverse. . it's no wonder you flip off me

--------lol....this was cool.....but i'm sure some herb voting wont git it--------

Haha, cried to Kemp for HOURS about the lines, your gettin rattled, bitch
You just ain't good enough to go .44. .
. .now that's just what I'm going to end this battle with

-----------na....this smells like a filler--------------

Stuck on some elementary shit. . but don't worry, I dont' fight sly
While your dopeness is such affable it's no wonder your such a nice guy

------lol...i had to look up affable.....this was an aiight line-----

NO WAY are you going to win. . man, I'll just keep hurtin this geek
I keep getting verse of the week. .
. .while you keep setting the milestone for verse of the weak

--------this was herbish werdplay...but atleast its werdplay--------

So much better than you. . seriously, I'ma just keep beating this guy
I'm the cornerstone of ill. . while cornerstone is where you sleep at night

------na this was a wack filler-----

You're trash. . and with your wack mixtape don't even plan for spinning
Though SPuL's the man of the hour. .
. .cause he has such a minute chance of winning

-------lol......this was aiight-------

That's true as hell too. . I'm just better and won't stop owning this dyke
And I'll leave you carrying so many Caen's hippies will take over the site

------lol.....this was dope....but thats just my opinion------

Believe it, you ain't on my level. . so I'll either keep beating this guy or *
.
.
.
.
.
. .* I'll drop a footnote that'll put your whole fucking face on the choir

-----------this was aiight....not the best closer...but its a closer-------



mimesis verse: 8/10.........



if my vote counts..........I vote mimesis.....he had more personals and less fillers than spul

overall....this was a cool battle

but no hate........and if u found any of my critique.....a lil' harsh.....well i'm like that with everyone.....so STOP COMPLAINING!!!!!!!!!!!.......lol......but n e wayz

................VOTE: Mimesis

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bwahahahaha, mim owned. (period)

haha, spul started off decent, but started getting gay...like, saying his sis sucked his dick, that was pretty bogus

that cena line was ill, the cornerstone line and the one after it...haha, laughed all way through

word

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Y'all can say I'ma terrorist, but really, that shit ain't gon hurt
Cuz the way I'm droppin' bombs on Austin, I'll leave Texas on high alert
I'ma two time tourney champ. So me wack? Forget your jokes
I M list-ed as a great, while yours is just great for getting votes
Your chance of winning's slim, kid. You want personals? You won't find shit
I see my glass more than half full, while you're just stuck seeing from behind it (pic)
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat...
..................................... then check mim's next verse for my punches!


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This is a waste of my time. . know you're going to get wrecked quick
Cause the last time you Cena win you had to battle yourself to get it
Fuck excuses. . YOU STILL DID IT. . and you still gonna spit softly
Bringing so many negatives inverse. . it's no wonder you flip off me
Haha, cried to Kemp for HOURS about the lines, your gettin rattled, bitch
You just ain't good enough to go .44. .
. .now that's just what I'm going to end this battle with
Stuck on some elementary shit. . but don't worry, I dont' fight sly
While your dopeness is such affable it's no wonder your such a nice guy



i got this battle quite differently
probably since i know these guys a little better

there was alot the above voters liked that i didnt

That's true as hell too. . I'm just better and won't stop owning this dyke
And I'll leave you carrying so many Caen's hippies will take over the site
Even you know I'm better than you. . so sit back and just listen
You succumb. . uhh. . ahh, fuck it at least your face will still give in
Stuck on some elementary shit. . but don't worry, I dont' fight sly
While your dopeness is such affable it's no wonder your such a nice guy


wtf? if you have to look a word up thats just forcing the wordplay, mim came w/ alot of forced wordplay like that truman shit
that i just cant give u credit for, where as spul came as consistent as he always does
and to his style as well
didnt feel like the angry mim verses we all know
felt like a badly worded JTR verse
sorry
v/ spul

I didn't have to look up any words, wtf @ that. It's called not being an idiot and being at least semi familiar with the english language. I can admit that the succumb line is kind of forced. . cause it's like "You suck umm. . uhh. . ahh fuck it" etc etc. But the rest of those aren't forced. And if those lines are forced how is "IM list-ed/getting votes" not forced? My instant message listed is good for getting votes? Whatever, though. Thanks for the vote.

It's either 2-1 or 3-1 (I don't know if Drakel signed in or not or if his feedback/vote is detailed enough).