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06-22-06, 10:08 PM
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-I cant wait-
IP: 5285 DC82
venting on this track,you wont be dissapointed.
All feed returned just leave links. I cant wait hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=4100237&q=hi Last edited by Ysdat : 06-22-06 at 11:10 PM. |
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06-22-06, 10:50 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
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06-22-06, 10:52 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
Nice beat choice, LE used this in a ill ass song once. But it's yea a good beat choice. Your emotion is pretty good, your breathe runs short though from trying so hard it seems. But that might just seem like that cuz your vocal volume is to low for this hard beat. I'd say turn it up a bit more man. Your hook wasn't to bad, the quality is way better now and your more fluent on the beat. not bad man, keep it up.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230367
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06-22-06, 11:29 PM
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IP: 4F84 8C0F
Listening...
Loved working with this beat...got me on the radio  Wow...quality is horrible...hook was alright I suppose. Pretty choppy though. Your delivery is good. It doesnt change but it's good. Flow is pretty good, nice and fast, vocals are pretty low. Flow does fall off due to your gasping at some points in the track. Overall, pretty good from your last stuff. Keep it up. RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230369 |
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06-23-06, 12:05 AM
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Ike
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IP: F5EA AA2D
listening.....
i like the intro to the beat....midievil type ish.... hook kicks in....first thing i notice is quality is lacking....hook goes with the beat...i feel if it was mixed better...itd be more catchy...but its kinda muffly..... also if you added like some whispering in the background of the hook..it would add to it...hooks where u take a lot of spaces inbetween words benefit from that......its almost like a 2nd hook in the background if u know what i mean lyrics are good....from what i can hear.....everything is coo really.... just up the quality..... please rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230444
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06-23-06, 01:07 AM
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IP: 5285 DC82
apreciatte the feed, will hit tracks up soon.
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06-23-06, 01:17 AM
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Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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IP: 70CA A6FB
pretty dope man keep droppin .
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06-23-06, 07:24 AM
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IP: 0EB4 1ACC
is there a verse on this track????
all i hear is the beat... damn kid... i thought you was gonna drop a lil somthing.... eh.... w/e... UPP YOUR VOCALS if there are any laid on this track 
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06-23-06, 03:41 PM
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IP: AFD0 9F86
vocals seem a lil, iunno, heavy but at the same time sounds like there's too much delay or somethin. it's like your too far away from the mic. maybe it's just the mic. flow is on point though, beat's not my type but it fits your delivery good. lyrics were decent, eh it's gettin a lil boring now, like the rhyme scheme is staying exactly the same. needs layers or adlibs or somethin. so what is it just like one long verse w/ 2 hooks? shit was kinda weird
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06-23-06, 05:10 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
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play it hi fi bro. |
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06-23-06, 11:21 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: A68E 9D69
its obvious you need to up your vocals...maybe start to dub your shit....if you dubbed the i cant wait part itd sound good, you feel off in the first once or twice......the hook could be good....its not bad just learn production skills...n youll move up quick....
RTF - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230479
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06-24-06, 12:41 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 266D 2B2D
Appreciatte the feed. Links will be hit up in a few hours when i get on a computer that doesnt have a pop up/cookie blocker.
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06-24-06, 09:55 AM
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...Closer Look...
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IP: EE3F C4D5
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beat is tight i'm feeling it madly...flow was nice u had a couple of multis there..dats a plus..and yeah u got nice breathe control...tight....only thing is u shud try making ur vocals clear xcept ur mic is cheap cos i heard it on hi fi and was kinna blur to my hearing...anyways hook was simple and nice,fit the tempo quite well..this is something i cud clap to rather than nod to..lol..keep them coming tho...props once again! hit my sig
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06-24-06, 04:43 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
all feed has been retruned.
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06-24-06, 07:25 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 3A9D 1961
Beatspretty sick, your delivery is different but yeah i like it, has a lot of energy and the flows constantly on point.
Lyrics sound decent for the most point but are a bit 'muffled' at some points, hook thing fits in. Overall it was solid and packed with energy, i liked it mate. decent stuff.
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