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09-04-06, 04:47 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Pure Changes *SOME DEEP SHIT*
IP: 001C 5107
yeah just about my life man
this has gotta be one of the best songs i've ever DONE REAL TALK! take a listen lemme know what u think DROP A LINK IF U WANT FEED!!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4399388 Links --------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234300 ====== http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234412 |
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09-04-06, 05:09 AM
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IP: 001C 5107
lol FO SHO
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09-04-06, 07:57 AM
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IP: 860D ECBB
Sup fam this was dope ! not the best at leaving audio feedback,..
But then production was nice, voice carried well. Nice tune. 1~ |
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09-04-06, 04:08 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 001C 5107
yo thanks for the feed
wtf is up wit people not rtf uppin |
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09-04-06, 07:13 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 001C 5107
22 views and 1 reply?? COME ON
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09-04-06, 08:21 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
what up....this is pretty good man....a bit more passion in this coulda been used.....well i guess cuz im comparing it to the eminem version....but you s's are hissing pretty harsh....but the lyrics are real which adds some validity to the song.....the hook is a strech but it works....good shit
i guess if you wan you can rtf the favor on that cho song that im on.... things i do or somethin...yep
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09-04-06, 08:22 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 001C 5107
alright man i'll get at you with some feed
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09-05-06, 02:09 AM
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IP: B08B 609B
alright i jus listened to it but im listening to it again jus so i dont miss anything
this beat is hot. for real. definitely matches the emotion that you wanna capture for this kinda song. i like the kids playing in the intro. your first verse kicks right in. as for emotion i think u got that. lyrically this was real cool. its always cool to hear someone jus let go of things and lay it out on a track. that part where u started talkin about church and God was real cool. i remember going through that same phase. chorus - im not feelin this as much as the verse. but the lyrics and the message are good second verse comes in. this is actually a good song. i like how real you're rapping. those are the best songs. it seems like u really dug deep to let this kinda stuff out. overall a pretty good song. the only thing i wasnt too excited about was the chorus, but those verses were well written. good job man. keep it up |
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09-05-06, 01:50 PM
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El Padrino
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IP: 07DA 3584
First thing i noticed is your Production... if id known idda been peepin you...
1st Verse:... i like what you speakin on.... the whole church thing you speakin on... powerfull... Hook: deep.... catchy... growin on me... 2ndVerse: deeper than the 1st verse... if you speaking on your life.. thats some shizzle... i feel you.... i gotta to give you props on dropin some serious thought out music... you got your production tight bro... your vocals seem very crisp... what kinda Mic you using??? At anyrate... you holding it down fam... Keep makin songs/ music like this.... cuz this is one of the deeper songs to hit the boards and its actualy very enjoyable.... RTF Don Tito Bronsky
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09-05-06, 05:55 PM
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IP: 001C 5107
alright i got ya man
thanks for the feedback |
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09-06-06, 07:53 AM
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Maggot
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IP: 624C 1C81
Rite then.....Beats dope but i expect this to be shit cus of it lol
but its ok your presence is good but you lack in emotion not in the lyrics cus they are deep so you should be putting more into your delivery but this is nice man dont get me wrong hit my shit.
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09-06-06, 09:25 AM
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IP: 001C 5107
I just went and peeped out ur music.....I couldn't understand anything you said
no pun intended |
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09-15-06, 11:13 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 3A9D 1961
beats sound,
flows on point from the start, voice a little monotone? Still sounds decent, voice and quality are decent, although at some points the effects make you sound like you hav a lisp... hook was sound, more emotion in second verse, a lot better. sick lyrics. good stuff man.
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09-15-06, 11:16 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 3A9D 1961
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09-15-06, 11:45 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 6605 16C1
Damn kid u needa stop frontin all ur tracks are shit u might have a flow but you stay rappin bout a fantasy of urs how u gon tell me where eva the fuck ur from ur ridin on 26 inch giovanas and u got this and that u don't kid stop actin hard u soft this ain't hate this is tellin u switch ur words u rappin to much bout shit u don't got
str8 up wanksta style right there and don't be like man im fuckin wit rokz and klerk im so big cuz them light weights this rap board shit ain't nothin no one eva makes it off this here so get ur ass off the net and start sendin ur demos out start tourin start sellin ur tape if u so serious bout rap if not its koo if this ur hobby and all understand that but don't think ur gon get signed by sittin on some rap board
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