Aiight

Verse are do within one hour after you check in:
16 lines
no c/v or d/r
3-0 is a K.O>
First to 5 (if we get slept on...its the most votes when the poll closes)

Consider this my check in....

UnEmceeAble you better rip this fool. Split representin HOLLA

Let tell you right now that I’m destin to win…and I’m gonna start from the endin so I don’t have to pretend-to-begin/
It’s Round two and I’m still leaving this MC crippled and scarred…you writing verses on boners but they still aint hard/
Blunt- you just might- drop a good verse on a good occasion… but every time you drop you come like used playstations/
Your about as fluent as claymation… you anxiously waiting a winning record but you need to *stay patient*/
You stuck on a losing-trip, you need a vacation…your verses will fit in better with the Dot-Com family at Gay-Nation/
Kid- I’m about to put your words and your sole in touch…cuz with your foot in your mouth your ass won’t be talking much/
I murder emcee’s when I battle- watch me cop-a-kill…and make that W vanish in front of your face like I was Copperfield/
The only reason you think you hot is because u got no fans…u sold out no-shows, your entertaining empty stands/
Your supplying with-out demand…let me pull your pants down to prove to every one that you’ve been dis-manned/
We aint even started to battle yet and you already on the retreat…if my eyes serve me correct, you surfin round RB with the most defeats/
You couldn’t even be shit with your head in the toilet seat…you rapping with candy in ya mouth and trying to say your rhymes are sweet/
Fuck this, smoking this cat is a waste-of-time…even my watch stops when you start to rhyme/
You need to set up an alias as compost-fine…cuz every time you com-post you post up recycled lines/
It’s like I tied you to the L, they way your bound-to-Lose…you’ll be sleeping in the ocean cuz I provide water front-views/

You got smoked:::::

Blunts are for smokers not for those who over and over re-act/
You didn’t have a chance the first time so why the hell did u rematch!/

check in... sorry it wasn't last night.. I was at work when I accepted an' it was time to bounce home...

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yo.. I might be longer than an hour.. I gotta go out on a delivery for work.. be back soon...

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I'm back, here's my verse:

dawg this isn't a re-match, it's your death re-lapse.//
see man you can't crack a blunt rap(wrap) without a rasor blade.//
an' yo-rap's so dull it's like safety scissors made by paper-mate.//
you got no game, wait.. you do, the game just don't want you.//
too lame for the industry, so like a sick horse I'm puttin' you outta your misery.//(lame is what you call a sick horse)
try'n to battle this MC is like adding insult to injury.//
cause after I cut you up in this round I'm comin' to gun you down in your city.//
forcefully I claim victory over this so called emcee.//
self-proclaimed dick-ryda, shit script writah, Un-emcee-able, even he know's he's un-able.//
in-capible of creatin graceful lyrics that don't 'cause ear-aches.//
your so-called hip-hop spirit must-a packed up an' left.//
'cause damn son, if that passes as rap tu-pac would be glad he's dead.//
you like biggie smalls, not notorious.. just a big talker with a small cock.//
oops, did I let ya secret out.. sorry bout that dawg.//
but hey, atleast I didn't tell RB about that shit you did with ya mom.//
with a flip of ya toung, and some stank old ass pussy cum.//
yum-yum, chew that shit up like a cow chewin' it's cud....//

^ I want to keep goin' on this, but it's 17 lines already....

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em took this this easy with wayyyy better punches. and he had metas and a lil wordplay.

The only reason you think you hot is because u got no fans

Kid- I’m about to put your words and your sole in touch…cuz with your foot in your mouth your ass won’t be talking much/

NICE^

overall nice verse unemceeable, just work on wording some of ur punches better so they will hit harder.

BLunt-MC. your verse was kind of childish. especially talkin bout moms and stuff, i was expectin this to be a closer battle. work on constructin metas and try to get off the mom and guns topics.



good battle y'all.



me vs. bribeone1:: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39493

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

I agree, man, you know how hard it is to get inspiration sitting at a fuckin' desk in a drab grey walled back room in an office.. damn, like can you say "writers block".. I'm disappointed in myself for this verse..

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yeh i know what u mean yo, just try to close ur eyes and envision a totally different surrounding. when i get writers block i just try to erase all my thoughts and just focus on stuff that has nothin to do with anything i was thinkin of earlier.

hey would u mind voting on my battle against lilbrick005. dont forget to put ur vote in the polls. thanks yo. :: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39462

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

uppin for votes

Can we see some votes PLZ. ....I know some of you are out there::::::::::::

ya mon ma vote goes to unemnceeable






hit up ma battle gainst lil rick

umm yeah....sure......*Not*

That vote don't count......only registered voters w/ poll votes rihgt Blunt?

Right

Ok......Uppin

k Uppin....