true jpoll

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^ lol - he's talking about you - have you not seen your sig? You're a stalker man.

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yo i'm no fuckin stalker i jus like the way she looks and i wouldnt keep ,buggin her so back off.
peace.

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This thread must have broke some sort of record... For most looked at... HOLY fuck...

2000 Views... hahahha

Gotta love it...........

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fuck you

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yeah whoa

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That thug kid is alil iffy, lol i'd stay away from him if I were you. Lolol homie got you (a stranger to him) in his SIGGY! Thats alil creepy playah.

yo idyllic do you want me to take it off its sure is creepin ppl out i'll take em off

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Hey, i have read some of your poetry..so i will give you a little breakdown on what i thought!

Amidst a dream

I thought this a very descriptive and deep piece! vocabulary was excellent at times, i was captivated by it on the first read..then i read it more throughly to get the concept of it. Many poets/rappers have touched on it, some fail, some excel..but you came decent, to me this piece was all about you struggling to avoid temptation, trying to avoid the clutches of satan, correct me if i am wrong because sometimes artists can be misunderstood in their message. Overall 17/20

Best Line: And Satan appeared and held out his black and torturous hand to a gate that was beyond a piercing light;
And with death heaped upon me I chose him to follow, as my days soon became only night. Props

Oh How!Oh How!
This actually made me feel so emotional, as i have lost my mother in the same circumstance..for some reason i had that damn britney spears song in my head..u know the one in the video where she dies in the bath..then wakes up again. Well while reading this i brought the emotion of that and the emotion of the lyrics together..and not to sound corny but it did overwhelm me,brought a tear to my eye as you said alot of things in the last half that i have wanted to say but never had considered of putting them on paper. It was an inspiration, as i am currently writing a om/poetry verse on the same topic. The first half set the scene..Second half just blew me away..19/20..Thank You

Just would like to say keep writing..coz theres a talent..made me think also..i enjoyed reading them didnt feel my time was wasted. I would like some feedback on my open mics from you..as not many people reply to mine..pm me if u would like to see..and maybe some pictures of myself since i viewed yours

pz spor

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Sporadic is BETTER than BigChase

Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase

Rapverse= No show Bigchase

Now Tell me whos better?

sporadic i'm glad you see her talent most of dese niggas go for her coz shes hot. yo you coo.
peace.
ps i'll give some feedback but in return you gotta vote for me in ma battle against da jokah and ill grammatix

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yeah no problem..i'll vote when i get home from work..im me a link i'll drop an HONEST vote

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Sporadic is BETTER than BigChase

Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase

Rapverse= No show Bigchase

Now Tell me whos better?

thanx thats wut i wanted to hear.oh and try to see mines through

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wha u mean..search for your battle?..cant u provide me a link?

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Sporadic is BETTER than BigChase

Rapbattlesuk= Sporadic 3-0 BigChase

RapWarz 1-2 Punch League= Sporadic 3-0 Big Chase

Rapverse= No show Bigchase

Now Tell me whos better?

oh duh im not that smart
ruff tuff thug vs da jokah
ruff tuff thug vs ill grammattix
at front lines

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your hot