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sabotage 5 62.50%
Drakel 3 37.50%
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Old 08-29-05, 06:35 AM   #16
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This was feedback posted for sabotage

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Old 08-30-05, 02:21 PM   #17
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uppin............................................. ......
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Old 09-02-05, 04:07 PM   #18
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hate bastardz who just check pollz, go to 'ell you mutha effers
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Old 09-03-05, 01:43 AM   #19
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Old 09-10-05, 03:15 AM   #20
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Old 09-10-05, 09:59 PM   #21
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Old 09-13-05, 01:53 PM   #22
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Old 09-15-05, 12:46 PM   #23
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Old 09-24-05, 07:44 PM   #24
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Old 10-04-05, 04:24 PM   #25
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Old 10-05-05, 03:24 PM   #26
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This was feedback posted for Drakel

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STOP EXPLAINING PUNCHES.

What is up with you dudes in The Establishment thinking shit is cool.

Word your punches so no explanations are needed.
 
Old 10-07-05, 04:09 AM   #27
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From: Crawley, England
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Voted For: sabotage

Drakel Verse

sab already has it bad, even a fat chance is looking slim
so im destroying his record, using his own name against him
^ setup was good...but punch lacked IMO

shove a steak to ya, it aint rare, but you're getting well done
im not hittin up your cezar collab...but my hits will give you one
^ Basic rhyme...self glorified...not feelin it really

hoofin' this dewd, you wont make it with no style, just va-moose
so im tyin' the knot in this battle, so sab can be in the noose/news
^ lol @ vamoose...ok rhyme as well...ok bar

sab never turns on his game, he's stuck wondering how to pivot
shit, he always sees 'ell..........like a hateful british
^ rhyme was a bit meh...sees 'ell lol e say hell to fam lol

this dude's down a deep hole......is story is one sad scoop
the only time i've lost 21....was as a kid shooting hoops
^ bar off point started but setup went off

zebra....screw what they say, ya can't buck up to me, aint part of the herd
text is bull, so mine's sweeping you quicker than computer nerds]
^ closer again is off point...

Overall
Not a decent verse it was to me an under average written...lotta self-g bars went off point in places...rhyme in one bar was weak rest was average/bsaic...coulda done better IMO

Sabotage aka Implicit verse

The jump off..adding an "N" after the "A" before you speak
So "Dr.Ankel" will feel more comftorable when he experiences "de-feet"
YUK...bar woulda been good 6 years ago lol

All of his drops get replies but let me tell you something
Half the responses are Drakel pleading "Come on man. Upping"
^ no diss...at all...weak bar

Check it..You're never respected in text..The reason's obvious and blatent
Can't face you're outdated..Flow's like your avatar..Ancient(avy is a dinosaur)
^ lol good personal liked this one

Infected by dyslexia..this bastard's faker than actors
Wanted to knock him senseless..Wait..Already spelt his country's name backwards(it says he's from Adanac..that backwards is Canada)
^ lol again aight personal

We give respect where its due..You get none..Heart of a statue cuz
And like unaware vampire victims..RV is stumped..Drakel...uh?(Dracula)
^ ok...dracula flip...hmm aight diss

Flipped a coin and he got way too excited to choose heads
I gave him skittles..told him Taste The Rainbow..so he ran to Q's thread
^ lol nice closer Q shit gettin played but lol @ this

Overall
Better verse more bars were better...some aight personals too...jus put explinations at the bottom not in the verse next time though coz ish fucks the verse layout...

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Old 10-07-05, 01:15 PM   #28
Implicit
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o damn i forgot about this battle. up this to the toppest of the top.
 
Old 10-08-05, 08:31 PM   #29
Implicit
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upping this. come on its been open for months.....
 
Old 10-17-05, 09:14 AM   #30
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From: Adanac
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
STOP EXPLAINING PUNCHES.

What is up with you dudes in The Establishment thinking shit is cool.

Word your punches so no explanations are needed.


stop being a whiny bitch over something as insignificant as that....wow.
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