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premanition | 5 | 83.33% | |
metaman | 1 | 16.67% | |
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03-29-05, 01:15 PM | #16 | |
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03-29-05, 03:37 PM | #17 |
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Voted For: Premanition
Metaman? Damn im still waitin on the evidence No punches inserted so ‘explanations’ are irrelevant hot opener! Gud to grab attention, get the reader to engage Man I literally wish ur shit wud jump up off the page ok, cud've been better Yeh I stage the event with true content for descent In the shadows? Meta’s got a torch in that tent decent. nice multi. Yeh you flow like a river, like air from a fan If the fan included a band round its fuckin fin span average punch. Its o.k, go borrow my verse, use that copy n paste Cos this over so quik its seems ashame it go to waste blah!! played concept!! im an authority here i punish kids daily, he's PRE-MAN so how he gon have da balls to face me? nice attempt but didn't puul it off. my lyrics hit hard break you down wit pounds of notes, you bout to "go down easy" like bud ice down yo throat, ok meta. decent line. why dis chicken cross da road to get merked in a text battle? this bitch is a joke his played punchlines aint laughable (lol), blah! not feelin it. you asked for a battle but i bet yo shits-pre-written, yo favorite rapper drop a hot line in the last fifteen-minutes? played concept!! imma send-this bitch home cause imma menace like dennis, you couldnt send hard shots if dis was a game of tennis! not feelin it!!! sorry!!! right yo...premanition beat meta out on everythin really. the only thing u tied on was structure and flow. prem came harder wit the personals and punches and was just a lot more consistent. return the fave......links are in my siggy!!!!!!!!! |
03-29-05, 06:59 PM | #18 | |
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Voted For: Premanition
prem~nice effective punch for you're opener, you have some creative lines in this verse, as well as good vocabulary, this flowed very well, which tied everything together, like you put some effort in instead of throwing something together as filler, good verse overall, i like the fan bar, and you're closer was strong, good job.1 metaman~lol@ the opener,effective punch there,but then you go into trying to rhyme text battle with laughable,which doesnt work,you're closing line was ok, not really an effective,hard hitting punch, but i see where you tried to go with this, i think..i thought you did ok in this verse, nothing really stood out, except the opening lines, since i thought prem had some creativity to his verse,i'ma have to give it to him, but good job both.1
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