Voted For: J DOT

J Dot boy, didn't ya mama tell ya not to talk to strangers/
See, this type of thing will put you in all kinds of danger//1
^^weak ass opener
Mess wit tha real 'J', J-Rin'll put ya life to a real quick end/
Cause 'J' will spot you then 'Dot' ya eye, son, ya won't win//2
^^nah....terrible
I'll grab up ya barz an' beat ya wit 'em, except they break/
Like you they frail an' your fake, remake ya rhymes on a take//3
^^??....lol,nah
Go ahead an' live this beatin,'livin' it live' like that on street-in/
You ain't got no heat heatin', boy, ya rapcareer death ya meetin'//4
^^blahness......
Kid, ya suck harder than a Dirt Devil, ya ain't even on my level/
Ya can't even tip tha scale, hell, ya needa elevate, get a shovel//5
^^decent.......
Like we playin' ball I go for a home run an' get me a grand slam/
So I run it all while you go for a single run an' strike out, damn//6
^^weak
Kid, ya goin'a be lucky to come out of this battle scared an' bruised/
Ya goin' past tha ER an ICU wit ya old bitten lyrics that are re-used//7
^^meh...simple played(biting lines)
Time an' time again, I've shitten shit better than what ya spittin/
Ill-defentily ya ain't ill even while vets are bitten, your wakly written//8
^^what?...this was dumb
Tell me, really, if ya was tha shit wouldn't ya have a real deal/
Not battlin' an ameuter thats killin' you, watchin' blood spill, fo' real//9
^^no punch.filler
That's enough for ya, I didn't 'Dot' ya, i dropped ya whole career/
So i'm tha new nigga to fear in here, take that shit in ya ear an hear//10
^^wack, wack wack.........
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sorry.....but go elevate.trhis whole verse was trash.......
work on ya punches a lil....dont mean ta be harsh but that was a waste of my tyme....
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J-Rin on the rebound, aint elevated since
13 posts and battling DOT?... I’m not convinced
^^weak...piss poor...i expect more from ya jdot..
I run thru more emcee’s than hockey rinks, u kids cant jam me
Tryna shoot me like a puck, I’ll take care of yo family
^^your bar was weak...but eh....
You’re a weak slut and your speech is played like 2pac threads
Cause when DOT shoot, he’ll dye yo shit like sisco’s head
^^meh
So go head and try and play me, u’ll get ya banana split quick
I’m owning you right now cause like a slave u’ll get whipped
^^ok,.......
And you talking like you tough, but I see you got no guts
Keep making false moves, you be in a box like pizza hut
^^only decent line
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but technically...pizza hut dont come in a box...the pizza does..
but im votiung for ya just for the plain simple fact YOU HAD ATTEMPTED COMPLEXITY N PUNCHES..........
jdot seriously this was a very weak battle....
hope to see better from ya in the future....
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pz....RTF..if ya want....

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!