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Old 02-12-06, 12:31 AM   #16
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uppin this for some more feedback.................
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Old 02-12-06, 04:41 PM   #17
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uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
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Old 02-12-06, 05:10 PM   #18
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This is a pretty nice piece. Your imagery was used very well and you had some nice multis in there aswell. the flow of this was decent aswell due to the almost perfect structure. this was a extremely good job, Hit Up My Om On 1st Page.
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Old 02-12-06, 07:39 PM   #19
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Nice rhyme scheme, good on the interlocking tip... decent content... pretty good use of vocab... overall fairly dope drop... everything else has been pretty much already said... keep doing what you do...

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Old 02-12-06, 08:48 PM   #20
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thanks homie....i'll rtf once i'm done cleaning my room
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Old 02-13-06, 09:15 PM   #21
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Yo this shit was hot............If you did audio i mgith just try to get you on a track....stay up and get audio.....
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Old 02-13-06, 09:36 PM   #22
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i'm gonna upload a bunch of my shit soon and then i'll holla at you soon
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Old 02-14-06, 09:58 AM   #23
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nice vocab and overall good rhyming

would like to see more similies and a central theme though


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Old 02-14-06, 10:20 AM   #24
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thanks for the feedback q............uppin for more
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Old 02-14-06, 05:09 PM   #25
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fire man..keep spittin that shit..best vocab ever.
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Old 02-14-06, 05:10 PM   #26
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thanks for the feedback homie......uppin
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