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Old 02-11-06, 01:06 AM   #1
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Fallacy (MC Collab)

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Replied to: You Scared & Mine this Ore

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Is the conscience limitless?, if it is tell me this
Why can’t every mortal see through the mist?
Decipher a diss? Live in harmony and bliss
And just stay off the fuck Off an MC hit list?

{Think-Beyond}

Kidz Spittin For Status While MC Makin Holy SENTENCES
Boastin On Wackness Ur NICE?....U’ll Get PRONED for the IGNORANCE
Bitchin In Every Verse Don’t get “HOed” FOR YA MIMICZ KID
The ‘Ground Supportive’..Itz Common For THOSE who have WITNESSED IT!!!
Every Lines Substantial We Leaving Onlookers AWWED in AMAZEMENT
Yall Foreva Spiting In Vain…MC’ll put Ya JAW in itz PLACE BITCH!!(Grounded)
Ya Steady Grippin For Propz Tryna Get A Good STANCE IN THE GAME
Itz Impossible With MC On Top Itz Not Happenin..The ANSWERS OBTAINED!!
Is Their Conscience Limitless…Niggaz Iz Wack So STOP SPITTIN
I Got Reasons For The Boastin And Braggin…The PROPZ GIVEN!
We Keep Speaking Hotness Through A iLL Mind Frame with WISDOM INVOLVED
Rap Used To Be Competitive..Tha Birth of MC put an END TO IT ALL!!
Opponents Never Survive All We’ve Faced iz ‘Dying’ the LAST STAGES OF LIFE
N U Can Be Like The ‘Past’..In Caskets With Darkness to IMPRISON YA SIGHT!!
We Fraud Cuz MC’s On Top Of The Game?…Our PLACEMENT IS RIGHT!
Make Remarkz.. Niggaz’ll Get Battered And Bruised FA SAYING THEY NICE!

Is the conscience limitless?, if it is tell me this
Why can’t every mortal see through the mist?
Decipher a diss? Live in harmony and bliss
And just stay off the fuck Off an MC hit list?

{Heaven’s Demon}

Start addressing niggas Mrs., half these niggas is bitches
Frontin’ like they hard or something, got me perplexed
Scratching my head at what he said, like what’s next
Game’s hexed, ignorant bitches have the right to be vexed?
Act like they writing the checks, starting fights with the vets
Reciting they wack verse, upset when we blurt the hurt
Pull up the skirt, thugs expose they chest under they shirt
Blood spurts from rivets blasted in, these mastered men
We do what we do… baby, blindly like bats in the night
Simply put MC Dawgs watching these young cats in a fight
We dwell in darkness; laugh at those chasing the light
Only eat grade A beef, or you just wasting the bite
I’m crazed got ya dazed in a maze, pacing with mice
You better off callin’ Ceelo… facing the dice
Triple singles, gotta take it, niggas laying you pipe
Bitches is getting fucked just fa saying they nice

Is the conscience limitless?, if it is tell me this
Why can’t every mortal see through the mist?
Decipher a diss? Live in harmony and bliss
And just stay off the fuck Off an MC hit list?

{Cannabarz}

hahaha, this is cool.. you a bunch of syllable rappers..
where the ones emceeS decide to place their ILLEST-FLOWS-AFTER!..
cuz these cats ACT-HARD.. thinking their RAPPiN-INTENT..
but when on the mic, you kinda wonder where that ATTITUDE-WENT..
so please, we don't need.. those acts of tryna survive..
your lines are derived from wackness, what were you really trying to hide?
your a newb to me, trufully you spit some wack shit..
I don't know what kinda other rap I should come back with..
but eitherway, to me today.. it seems these emcees are played out..
spitting on smackdvd's makes other rappers lay doubt..
come on? what kinda of shit is that, to spit for other kids in tracks..
adlibbin wack, writtens cat, spittin not even giving facts..
all that this in that, stuff you call illness is laughable...
just so that you know, you'd be lucky to even have half the flow

Is the conscience limitless?, if it is tell me this
Why can’t every mortal see through the mist?
Decipher a diss? Live in harmony and bliss
And just stay off the fuck Off an MC hit list?
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Old 02-11-06, 12:26 PM   #2
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^^^Bump...

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Old 02-11-06, 12:32 PM   #3
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This was simply nice...am feelin this..
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Old 02-12-06, 09:49 AM   #4
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yeah fosho this had some nice flows n quotes.. some parts of the flow was str8 gansta at times.. so yea i was feelin that.. all verse worked pretty well together..

i diddnt like the las 2 lines of the chorus much.. so yea that cyud b betta

nice drop still...stay 1
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Old 02-12-06, 12:45 PM   #5
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This was nice, the flow was really good. I was feelin the whole thing, everyone had good verses. The chorus was really nice, in my opinion. The vocab and rhyming was great. Structure was good and everything. This was good, im hopin to see more from ya'll. Keep it up. Please rtf on any of the links in my sig, thanks Peace.
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Old 02-14-06, 03:29 PM   #6
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Good structure and multis from most...

good shit.
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Old 02-14-06, 05:12 PM   #7
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i really like this, first off i think the hook was really good for this drop whoever did it congrats, now for the verse, think beyond your verse was nice to read alot of good bars a def good start for this drop, H.D your drop was good, flow was good, you tryed to get down with the program i feel you fam nice little multis towards the end i thought you did your thing, cannabars you also had a good drop, the start of your verse was good i thought and then you got into it which was a really good read and you fit prefect to end this collabo good drop fellas i really like this!!!! stay up and return the favor of some feed back
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Old 02-15-06, 08:39 PM   #8
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i think this was nice, but h.d. you could have put a little more effort, seen better from you. but this was a good piece. nicely put and the hook was nice...i enjoyed all the verses so keep it up.
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Old 02-21-06, 08:15 PM   #9
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^ *chuckles* ya do one collab with me and want ta hold me to that standard for-eva huh? ... lol aight I got you on the next one...
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