i coulda SWORD i already left feed on this. but anyway, anyone else hear about jay-z biting over 160 lines from artists such as biggie smalls, snoop, big l, etc???

anyway, tito, ya delivery's sick as fuck on this mayne. of course, unless jay bit that hook from somewhere he comin nice as fuck wit that sample as well lol damn, this shit sorta clubbish, i could see myself freakin dancin wit a chick to this. flow's on point, mos def lyrics aint amazin but for wut you were goin for you did this well. n damn the swag, likin the cockyness too. good shit

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intros ok...gets a bit weird, lol..you come in nice...decent rhymes, on point flow...lol I think this is the hook.... its ok, Im guessing you simply used the beat the way it was given to you.

overall its some what original.
decent track.

thanx for the love yall




lets keep this Banger @ the top

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

word.... nice Sample.... but i dont really like the random "pimp" on first listen

i gotta admit that ur voice/flow combination is one of my favorite parts of ur music (altho i still say its nasally, it doesnt sound bad) i actually like the way u incorporated "pimp" without the sample.... that may be how the beat is made, but its better without the sample, just like the sample is better without the random "pimp"

ur lyrics are straight.... pretty obvious subject, but u bring a good swagga to the track...... i never thought ur lyrics were anythin great, but u always have that unique flow..... never the obvious flow for a beat....

solid track..... it seems the mixin was not as crisp as on ur latest track with Nyg and Tony, but still decent...

pc

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

intro is kinda annoying actually..beat is cool nothing special

verse 1 kicks in. flow is cool..like the delivery on this one. that whole part with jay sayin "pimp" sounds like it went on for too long though.

verse 2 - lyrics nothing that stood out..honestly i think you fell off on this verse. the first had a little more to it.

that last verse u did made the song better



overall this song wasnt all that great. quality was real cool though..delivery on the first verse was nice too



RTF IN MY SIG.

preicate the feed

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

ight this sounds cool hook is coo but i dont like how the sample goes thru ur verse.....otherwise it was cool....beats a lil different it seems the sample made the beat....lyrics was coo and flow was coo overall pretty gud track ight my dude stay up

uppin uppin uppin

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'